RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
tim dim 5 83.33%
smokey817 1 16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 05-18-05, 10:46 AM   #1
Ghost
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
 
Ghost's Avatar
 
Posts: 800
From: Lubbock,Texas
This was feedback posted for smokey817

IP:

Vote-Tim Dim
Smoke! Man Seperate Yo LINEZ so We Can -Atleast- Know What Ya tryin To Say or Rhyme!N Maybe we Can Judge Ur verse!Read the Verse N Didnt Even Make Since Ta Me!
Tim Dim----------------------
Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down
lol 8/10
Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son
^Pretty Weak 6/10
Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun
LoL 7.5/10
just thought id tell ya da scorez of ya linez but HOLLA!
__________________
"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
 
Old 05-18-05, 10:50 AM   #2
Ghost
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
 
Ghost's Avatar
 
Posts: 800
From: Lubbock,Texas
IP:

MAN WTF i didnt Want That For Da FEEDBACK! That Was A FCKIN VOTE!!
Man BUT MY VOTE STILL GOES TO TIM DIM!!!
__________________
"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
 
Old 05-19-05, 06:06 AM   #3
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
Posts: 3,499
From: STL
IP:

Voted For: tim dim

Weak battle, but Tim Dim gets it for his structure, cuz smokey's sucked...Both need major elevation on punches...
__________________
B.M.B. Productions


CHECK THE FUCKING BEATS.

Send a message via AIM to B. Magik Send a message via MSN to B. Magik Send a message via Yahoo to B. Magik  
Old 05-20-05, 04:50 AM   #4
tim dim
Middle Weight
 
tim dim's Avatar
 
Posts: 413
IP:

uping this battle for votes.......................
 
Old 05-21-05, 09:06 PM   #5
tim dim
Middle Weight
 
tim dim's Avatar
 
Posts: 413
IP:

^lol why would you veiw polls on such a shit battle?
 
Old 05-21-05, 10:32 PM   #6
tim dim
Middle Weight
 
tim dim's Avatar
 
Posts: 413
IP:

..................................................
 
Old 05-22-05, 02:18 AM   #7
tim dim
Middle Weight
 
tim dim's Avatar
 
Posts: 413
IP:

upitying this thread to get this shit over with...
 
Old 05-25-05, 03:49 PM   #8
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
From: Salford
IP:

Voted For: tim dim

Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down

WHORED HIS WHOLE VERSE.

Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son

PLAYED BUT WAS ATLEAST A PUNCH

Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun

NOPE....

smokey yours was a story of random words, no punches or flow and hard as fuck to read.

you seriousely need to either read a tut. on structure and punches, or quit.....

tim gets it for using a punch or two and being readable....

no hate, rtf so i dont need to dq my vote.
__________________
 
Old 05-26-05, 07:57 AM   #9
MyNamesGrafhYall
==bLaCk-HanD==
 
Posts: 1,342
From: In A Guttah
IP:

Voted For: tim dim

Tim Dim Wuz Short n Sweet, Da Verse Had Much Better Lyrikal Content An Da Shit Actually Looked Lyke A Verse An Not A Paragraph, Work On Yo Structure Smokey

Vote/ EZ Win Fo Tim Dim, Dont Even Need 2 Explain Why

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature
__________________
==I Don't Rhyme, I Just Explain Shit Real Good==
 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 08:45 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.