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05-18-05, 09:23 PM
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Ahh this was iight , nothing really special , could have been alot better..
Structure was alittle shacky , lines were all over the place.. you had decent wordplay/ vocab ...could have better.. decent concept..nice flow... you had decent imagery.. Okay feeling..Overall it could have been better.. but it was good
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05-19-05, 12:48 AM
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thanks for the feed yalll uppin.................
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