upppppppppiiiiinnnnnngggggggg like hot air baloons.

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this fake ain't gonna last when i stab his back wid broken glass
and rip out his eyes till I got this mutha fucker in a open casts
3...battles are about punches, not a bunch of i'm so hard i'll kill ya talk!!
your flows will never glow like the god damn rainbow
maby because your illiterate and you don't have a brain hoe
4...basic rhymin, a small multi, the setup was wack and the punch was mildly humurous but still weak!!
your talking is childish and your insults are 2 mild
he thinks he's got cock and balls but he's really suicidal
0...didn't rhyme, nuff said!!
you get your neck snapped in half when u step up 2 real emcees
this boy is dead like autum leaves and i can blow his ass away like the breeze
3...wack!! self-glorifyin, weak wordplay and overall the whole punch was just too basic to be hard hittin!!
damn! your as ugly as cheese so please stop rapping and freeze
you should be crowned wack so take the exit and just leave!
4...UGLY AS CHEESE!! WTF!!! you call that a punch, this was the wackest of them all, and the 2nd line was pure bullshit and has been done before by many herbz!!

OVERALL: 14/50


Claims he's accomplished....but the bitch never even had-a-sig..
And if you were tall and meen....you wouldn't be above average!!
5...weak really, 2nd line was kinda good, but the first sayin he aint never had a sig, that has nuthin to do with being accomplished!!
I said i was gonna win, and not an RV head even showed a doubt..
And you tripped and admitted gayness...shows your down and out!!
3...two played concepts in one bar, self-glorifying and gay lines are wack, you should know that so stop droppin them!! LoL!!
Il remind ya how mad dog owned you...so ya can never say ya forgot..
And you could punch straws' weed......and wouldn't hit the jackpot!!
5...ok punch but ya threw in the "weed" shit which ruined it cuz that is another played concept!!
If your cheesy lines represented crisps id call accomplish a nik-nak..
And ya must have karate'd someones spine....the way he gets kickback!!
5...not really feelin this punch, you put in some cheesy shit too, LoL!!! but the whole kickback shit was a nice touch, just ruined by the setup!!
You remind me of a broken jigsaw, the way ya skill is missing...
Couls murder with a pen....and his raps wouldn't make a killing!!
5...pretty basic, best punch i think, first line was nice although i have seen that jigsaw shit before, i wasnt really feelin the 2nd line though!!

OVERALL: 23/50

weak battle
accomplish brought no punches
had one bar that didnt rhyme, some shit talkin
played concepts, too basic and no real wordplay
daubs had a few played concepts
again was fairly basic, some average wordplay
didnt bring anything really creative
most punches were ruined by the setup
shud definitely work on that
try getting more creative
use more complex vocabs and wordplay!!


V/ - Daubs

RTF!!! Link to my CALI battle in my sig!!
Be sure to leave decent feedback so it dont get removed by strobe cuz that been happenin a lot in that battle

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vote=daubs.... my vote comes for daubs cuz his shits more original better punches....vocab was ehh....decent from both of you but still..daubs took the cake on this one right here...good shit too both tho...keep it up ~1

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