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06-09-05, 12:02 PM
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Voted For: art-stica~Mente
this was a dope battle i enjoyed both peices alot... both did a good job but it comes down to this... Drakel: this was a good piece, very emotional you had good vocab, flow was amazing on this good job, you just lack the experiance that u need but it is a good piece, i felt u stayed on track throughout your whole verse well done, here is 1 line i felt stood out from the rest: its moving, you create an atmosphere so perfect, theres nothing to debate as if my life blooms new happiness from your bliss that fits ideally in place ^^ this blew me away litterally, it give me the image that its all peceful and happy... nice good job man just keep dropping em and you will be one of the top topicals writers on this site... Tweety: what can i say u never fail to drop dope, emotion is always deep and always anger lol, i like reading your topicals... vocab is good, flow is ight not too bad but its a little choppy in places, you always go deep down into the subject which is always a plus, you take things further than most people would good job... here is one line i felt stood out from the rest: My eyes drip in red, with angry veins coursing to my pupil…How could you? I loved you…our heart was red, our future was violet, and here you stand blue. ^^ this is a dope image of being angry using colours lol very creative... ight good job tweety keep droppin them things man... imma give this to tweety for having a more emotional piece, better images of whats going on and better vocab... drakel you did good fam but i thought tweeties was better no hate pzz |
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06-09-05, 04:24 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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Uppin this bitch.........................................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-09-05, 06:48 PM
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aighty, good battle we got going here tweet, props to ya.
i'll get at returning shit later, im out for a bit.
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06-10-05, 06:56 AM
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^^ Coo, Uppin this battle...............................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-11-05, 12:35 PM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-11-05, 02:23 PM
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I Am Mortal Combat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-13-05, 12:07 AM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-13-05, 08:11 AM
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uppin............................................. ..
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06-13-05, 08:57 AM
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
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Nyce battle, maybe u shuld stick 2 this, more suited 2 ur style ya know?
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06-13-05, 09:35 PM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-13-05, 07:20 PM
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^ lol, its funny because you got owned by a topical head, hahahahhahaha
yeah, i own you in everything man....how bout after our rematch, we battle topically i hadn't done text in almost 3 months, and still managed to key something up and own you, that is hilarious! anyways, bump
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06-14-05, 07:57 AM
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shizzle, tweet knows how it is..................up
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06-14-05, 06:03 PM
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Bump this up[..........................................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-15-05, 11:09 AM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-15-05, 06:51 PM
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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