Voted For: White Powder

Powder, shit flowed well. Breakdown.

Flow: Powder, Blaze's shit was fucked up, and half of it wasn't spelled right, and that shit was fuckin' me up.
Punchlines: WP, shit was str8
Personals: WP, check any line.
Vocab: WP
Fav Bar: WP: the Cigarette, Net Bar.
YB: The sledgehammer in the U-Haul bar, shit was nice.

Vote: White Powder. Personals win battles. And he had a whole lot.

-CJ-

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Voted For: Young Blaze

White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*

MEH DECENT ENOUGH OPENER

Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*

NICE PERSONAL,BUT PUNCH NOT CREATIVE.

Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*

nOPE, NEEDED WORDPLAY IN THIS BAR I FEEL.

Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*

YEAH PRETTY NICE, GOOD FLOW.

Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*

GOOD CREATIVE PUNCH AND A NICE CLOSER.

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I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'

HAHAHA NICE OPENER GOOD WORDPLAY.

He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul

YEAH AGAIN GOOD WORDPLAY.

Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat

PLAIN DOPE, WAS FEELIN THE WORDPLAY IN SET UP AND GHOOD PUNCH.

I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text

HAHAHA NICE, ALTHOUGH CONCEPT IS A KINDA PLAYED.

Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...

MEH NOT HARD PUNCH BUT GOOD CLOSER.

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Both ok verses, but WP tried too hard if you get me.
Too many explinations and links although wp came with personals like fiyah, blazes verse flowed a lot better with multies and imo had more creative harder hitting punches WITH A LOT BETTER WORDPLAY THAT HAD ME LAUGHIN.

GOOD BATTLE NO HATE,
BLAZE RTF, OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQ'ED.

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Voted For: White Powder

structure-powder
flow-powder
creativity with rhymes-blaze
metaz-tie

overall i liked powder's better becuz it all went together better it was on point...blaze, at times u seemed u were trying too hard to get a whitty rhyme instead of just letting it flow

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Ight Murda

I 'Twist U'r words around' like i got Ur 'Tounge Tied' Till U'r intestants-rip
& 'SLap U'r ass Backwards' like gettin hit by a 'Dislexic-Pimp'
na its ok
He's just too Punie to move-ya'll, while Blaze is just too raw
P couldn't 'Pack a Hard Hit' if he threw a SLedge hammer in a U-haul
wordplay ok
Pop-heat & could 'Mix concrete wit ya tounge' & U still couldn't 'Talk-the-streets
Cuz i'll 'Beat U in the Booth' like 'ass wippings in a slide in restraunt-seat
wordplay but punches arent that good
I'll 'blow out U'r spine' like Speakers on your kneck
my Flow 'Gets rid of P' So You'd think I used 'Toilet cleaner in my Text
nope not feeling it
Man! your Ass-text Sees U'r death, Funeral & blood Bath-Next
Till I 'Smash your "Car-Rear"' like 'Driving Crash-Tests...
ight

you had no personals other than mentioning a name
booo at that ish that drops you badly



White Powder wack??..... Not a chance kid, at least I battle VETS..*
Look at your stats 15-3 against kids who haven’t hit puberty yet..*
personal and punch finally
Diss me on stretchin, you've done it more than kirstie allie’s waist..*
How you ill? Wen kids wit losing records r the only ones ya faced..*
ight
Rookie of the Year? No one voted for u, its clearly self-proclaimed..*
You took your name from a signed rapper. you should be ashamed..*
ok
Afraid to b weedless? but he aint touched a g, not even a cigarette..*
“Jersey” aint got nothing, im straight “heat” hittin nothing but “net”..*
like the wordplay and punch and personal
Every bar personal, u got bout as much to say as typin wit space-bar..
Call blaze palindrome cuz ya shits the same side to side like racecar...*
ok

you had personals and punches combine which is why i think you win

V/WP

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Voted For: White Powder

Blaze: Structure was poor... Shit was hard to read. Punches n wordplay werent that bad, but nothing to go "ooo" at... Flow was on most of the time.

WP: Easier to read... although some personals were a bit ehh, it was very consistent. flow was basic, but nothing wrong with it...

basically readibility/personals/flow>poor structure/flow/punches...

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