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Ackrite 3 37.50%
E.C 5 62.50%
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Old 06-09-05, 04:07 PM   #16
E.C
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Old 06-09-05, 07:59 PM   #17
AckRite
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Old 06-10-05, 06:07 AM   #18
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Old 06-10-05, 11:17 AM   #19
Mad Dog
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Voted For: E.C

Ackrite

Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
^ can't access ya PM box...shoulda quoted it after the verse...coz this link is wasted...effected bar too

Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
^ Wordplay on UK is mmm ok...an aight bar...kinda self-glory though

Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
^ Blah gay bars played...creativity needs to be upped

Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
^ ok bar...an aight punch nuthin to make me go OHHH though

My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!
^ closer isn't dope...ok...but coulda been better

Overall
Just an average verse really rhymes flow & structure good jus punches were meh/ok and opener was ruined coz of no access to ya PM box...average at best...needed work though

E.C's Verse

you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
^ Opener better than 1st verse 1st line a lil meh though but punch/diss on point

The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
^ good personal...slight self-g though...

Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
^ blah self-g punch wasted diss there Atkins thing bought this up though

I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
^ lol best bar of battle so far IMO 1st line a lil used now though 2nd line picked it up

You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)
^ Good closer nice wordplay...punch...ok...good closer...

Overall
E.C ya got this...only just though...basically more effective on punches again not much OHHHH standard but enough damage was done to pick up the win...

V/E.C...no RTF required as E.C dropped a vote in Got Skillz...so this is my RTF
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Old 06-10-05, 07:16 PM   #20
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Old 06-11-05, 07:59 AM   #21
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Old 06-11-05, 12:23 PM   #22
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Old 06-11-05, 05:51 PM   #23
E.C
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Old 06-11-05, 06:38 PM   #24
.Barz Of Steel.
Don't Even Think About It
 
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Voted For: AckRite

Wow E.C. I really expected much better from you man

E.C.:

you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",

Weak 3/10

The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,

LOL funny personal, but weak set-up...5/10

Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,

Gay and played man 4/10

I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,

OK 5/10

You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)

Decent closer...6/10

Overall: 23/50 (46%)

Ackrite:

Good verse from you, pretty much what I expected

Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!

Links are played, but the line was nice 7/10

Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)

LOL decent, but there is no 'O' in 'UK' LOL 6/10

Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!

Nice...7/10

Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!

Weak...4/10

My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!

Decent closer, coulda been better 6/10

Overall: 30/50 (60%)

V/ Ackrite
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Old 06-11-05, 06:39 PM   #25
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BTW, please RTF or I will remove this vote.

Thanx
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Old 06-12-05, 01:30 PM   #26
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Voted For: E.C

e.c good flow very simple to read and understand
good vocab kinda basic but not that simple punches were acurate and clever and hit pretty well also kinda made me laugh whichis always good inna battle to have sum humour marques huston line was my fav lolol

ackrite-good flow also very easy to read vocab was good not that basic either but not to complex punches were ok but not all that acurate sum where and then they just got plain but u also had sum funny lines but that uk line was dumb didnt do anything for me xept made be like uh oh other than that cant really fault anything else but e.c gets this imo simply becuz his punches stayed consitent good drop both yall..........
vote/e.c
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Old 06-12-05, 01:35 PM   #27
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ight leave links if u want a battle voted on.... uppin for the last vote.......
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Old 06-12-05, 04:58 PM   #28
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uppin for the last vote..............................
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Old 06-13-05, 04:17 PM   #29
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uppin for the last mother fucking vote............
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Old 06-13-05, 04:39 PM   #30
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Aeyo Imma Check Ya Battle Wit Ghost @ Bars.............UPPIN'
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