http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195648
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ya good drop... only thing is the chorus doesn't really stick out... dont know if u can mix it but it needs somethin to make it stand out a lil more cuz u be rappin then goes into the chorus and they aint real distinguishable... maybe just hype ya voice a lil more or calm it down... idk sumin... pz good drop

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^... hype ya voice more... or calm it down.... chorus is no good? yo.... u are the master of audio... show us how u got so ill... lol

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IIGht..I'm Likin Thsi Track..Hook is Good..Feelin It..N.Y Reppin..IIght..Bk all Day..anyway, Flow was Good..Lyrics Were Real good Too..Feelin Em...Delivery was griimey N Ya voice Was hood...Keep Droppin Dun..

good drop as usual sun use this for the next mixtape probally nice drop good flow as usualfix that damn shit your mic be doing with your Ss all the damn time though

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thanks a lot man. hes got a lot of tight shit. why the fuck did he diss senser now them cats tight.

lmfao

^ it wasnt outta hate, i think it was just a battle....

o yea... lol at cali's attempts to make a good mixtape by throwing a few good heads on it n thinnking ppl will respect him....lmao

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jea u sent me dis shit on AIM, good beat
chorus is catchy naw mean
verse is straight
goo shi fam
get at me

peep me and DI's new track

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