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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)

Aiight let's see this:
Typical:
they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be
but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat
nigga, what the fuck was this? no... 2/10
i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype
so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice"
ok..... 4/10
becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies
keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis
haha nice.... 6/10
wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip
but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick
ohh, nice... 7/10
my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script
funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch
nah........ 4/10

Not bad, started bad, but middle was hot. nice... 23/50 (46%)


aiight jimmy:
Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical
& Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical
lol nice. battlin' herbs. haha... 7/10
Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss
Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss
aiight... 4/10
Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp
And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt
cooo... 5/10
Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs
Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs
lmao....... nice..... 7/10
Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez
Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez
ehh... opener coo, punch nah, so 4/10

aiight, I seen better from you. but this was still good enough for the W. good shit 27/50 (54%)

v/Troop

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Voted For: Typical

they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be
but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat
^^u mean now right?and this was weak,but flowed nice
i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype
so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice"
^^OK
becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies
keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis
^^weak punch...but flowed nice
wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip
but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick
^^LOL...this shit made me laugh
my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script
funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch
^^OK

Ur flow was crazy throughout the whole verse.The best line was the one about jimmy only goes pocketz for dick.U had a couple of weak punches in there that were really basic though.

Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical
& Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical
^^^weak
Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss
Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss
^^self glorifing?or did he really do dat
Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp
And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt
^^pimp and attempt dun rhyme and too unoriginal
Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs
Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs
^^^nah...seemed to glorify
Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez
Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez
^^^Nice

Ur shitwas structured better than his....but didn;t flow as well.Only good punch weas the last one for you.U had a couplke of weak punches and one that self glorified.That one about callin u out.Did he really say that he's eager for his 9th loss or are u glorifing urself again?

Vote-Typical(please vote in link below)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901

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Voted For: Typical

Wow, This shit is gonna be close...

Troop:

Your gonna get Ko'd Until your Conditions Critical
& Under 100 Posts from your Competition is Typical

blah 5/10

Whos ya Crew..Its Probly going on its Ninth Boss
Callin me Out..Told Rv u were Eager for ya 9th Loss

Decent 6/10

Your Bound 2 Get Hoe'd....... like ya Fightin ya Pimp
And This is a Ko..Like Iron Mikes last Fightin Attempt

Good...7/10

Your Not Gangster..1 call have u Thrown in Full Rugs
Im Goin Ova ya Head like Infants Thrown in Full Tubs

LOL Nice 8/10

Orgy Viewin on the Internet. 1 time u seen 10 Dimez
Focused?How when u cant Do No More than 10 Linez

Decent 5/10

Overall: 31/50 (62%)

Good verse from you man, but you had some played lines, and some just werent that creative. Personals were there, but I would've liked to see more. Apart from those things, everything else was fine here.

Typical:

they call me typical, the one u should aspire to be
but for know, take this lose like u admire defeat

Solid Opener 7/10

i read ur old rhymes to see the proof in ur hype
so after this u could say: "at least i used to be nice"

LOL Sweet 9/10

becuz essentially, i've designed a recipe for dining on my enemies
keep trying where u residing, but dont rely on hiding in perenthesis

Good 8/10

wit a name like that, u should be robbin persons on the strip
but jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick

LMAO 9/10

my surgical gift's, equiped to whip ur verginal script
funny how this isnt jail... but ur my personel bitch

Good closer 8/10

Overall: 41/50 (82%)

Real good verse from you man. Punches were strong, creative, and consistent. Personals were there and they hit well. You had some funny plays on his name, particularly the "jimmy only go in pocketz when hes searchin for a dick" line. Overall, a solid drop for you man.

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