RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Daubs 5 83.33%
K-Trini 1 16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 06-19-05, 03:02 PM   #1
Kirk
Peace, Love, Unity
 
Posts: 5,455
IP:

Voted For: Daubs

K-Trini-Your verse was alright... Nothing special... The punches weren't hitting very hard... only one that stoof out was the last line... but thats its... You weren't very consistent with your punches and your lines were stretched like mad... Although the last line was good it didn't make all that much sense.... But anyway... alright verse... nothing too creative.. mostly punches i've seen before...

Daubsy- I enjoy reading a verse from Daubs cause they're very creative with his punches... IP line was funny and humor is great to have in a battle... I didn't really get the second bar but i get the jist of it... and your last lines were very creative too... You basically won this because you had much better consistency, harder hitting punches, and more creativity.... So overall you got this homie...
__________________


88 miles per hour should do it.
 
Old 06-19-05, 03:02 PM   #2
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
Posts: 857
From: bronx
IP:

I voted for K-trini cause his verse was more complex and his punches was creative like this one for example

Fantasizin so much,U purposely spit whack to stay "under" an emcee/
Daubs couldn't regularly rhymth to the beat, if he swallowed an artery/

this 2 bars are better than DAUBS whole verse IMO


this was a good line by daubs but it was not enough

My raps are like tight knots, by you they wont become undone..
Battlin me again, its like restartin chess games .......................
.........................................You end up back to square one!!

so thats why i voted for trini but both of ya stay up.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 06-19-05, 05:08 PM   #3
Castro...
QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
 
Castro...'s Avatar
 
Posts: 3,735
This was feedback posted for Daubs

IP:

checkin pollz......................................
 
Old 06-19-05, 07:17 PM   #4
K-Trini
Banned: Cheating
 
K-Trini's Avatar
 
From: N.Y./born in Trinidad
IP:

uppin...........................................
Send a message via AIM to K-Trini  
Old 06-20-05, 01:56 AM   #5
MADDRAPPER
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 1,550
This was feedback posted for Daubs

IP:

this was off the hook however it would be better with multi's this wasn't bad at all
 
Old 06-20-05, 10:22 AM   #6
.::.provoked.::.
.::.Back Bitches.::.
 
.::.provoked.::.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 1
From: Lesta...InIt
IP:

Voted For: Daubs

IP: 9419 3D1C - not any more

---------------
punches - D
persnals - D
Flow - D
metals - none
--------------------
this battle was nice D came good liked some of the punches K u didnt fcome hard punches were pretty weak flow was not there didnt like ur verse so D gts my vote
Send a message via MSN to .::.provoked.::.  
Old 06-20-05, 10:25 AM   #7
.::.provoked.::.
.::.Back Bitches.::.
 
.::.provoked.::.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 1
From: Lesta...InIt
IP:

D - return vote on my battle in sig - bottom picture (lnks)
Send a message via MSN to .::.provoked.::.  
Old 06-20-05, 10:26 AM   #8
Ghost
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
 
Ghost's Avatar
 
Posts: 800
From: Lubbock,Texas
This was feedback posted for Daubs

IP:

nice famz u got him.................................
__________________
"This Worlds A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits"-Gh0st-
 
Old 06-20-05, 04:03 PM   #9
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
From: Salford
IP:

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^
__________________
 
Old 06-20-05, 04:40 PM   #10
Acuity
Rastafari Walk Tall
 
Acuity's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,527
From: East London, (Hackney)
IP:

Voted For: Daubs

VOte: Daubs

K trini- u gotta up your creativity, u need to come op with more original hard hitting punches, your structure was fine and ur shit flowed well, but u just didnt really damage daubs wid any of ur line..ur attempts at "wordplay" were well wack, at least ur trying though, basically u need personals n berrer punches...1

Daubs: some okay wordplay the shiz bout ropes was kinda played, ur line bout council tax was kinda funny, some elements of humour in drop, ur structure n flow was fine, u basically won with hard hitting n more creatine punches n personals...

Peace
__________________

"His Imperial Majesty Haile Selassie I, Conquering Lion of the Tribe of Judah, King of Kings of Ethiopia and Elect of God"

Blog

Graphic Designer, Illustrator, Web Designer

 
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:26 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.