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07-08-05, 11:59 AM | #16 | |||
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this OM=completely weak and terminated soon......and it was mostly stupid in my opinion cuz you tried to aim this at the crew but then you spit about stanza...thats one person of the whole crew..you mixed up ya concept...and ya structure was the worst i've seen for a while....flow was aight...punches were wack...personals lacked...vocab was plain....opener was ok and closer didnt make since because it was choppy...
overall-3/10 keep workin on your diss tracks but not towards RAW or even me because I will come back with heat....werdness |
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07-08-05, 01:01 PM | #17 | ||||
everytime i rhyme...
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haha ur gay..
hate is weak....honestly give honest feed http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2275046 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198806
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07-08-05, 01:03 PM | #18 | ||||
everytime i rhyme...
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u dumbass
the structure was fucked up for a reason This verse is proof i fuck up stanzas, whole reason i fucked up the structure god ur wack..n u dont get that line quit rapping
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07-08-05, 01:22 PM | #19 | |||
The Rise
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yea i get the line and no im not hating Im sayin my opponion....you're the one hating on RAW cuz you got cut...woop-d-doo its just the net get a life...and idk why you hatin on me its not i made a diss about you....so think before speakin...~1~
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07-08-05, 01:24 PM | #20 | |||
The Rise
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and plus your bitchmade for givin out the password....~1~
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07-09-05, 11:12 AM | #21 | ||||
everytime i rhyme...
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upp upp n away.
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07-09-05, 12:51 PM | #22 | ||||
everytime i rhyme...
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yup...........................
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07-10-05, 02:55 PM | #23 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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Im wiv raw n all but a reall head or some1 hu aint ignorant to the diss wud realise this is a tight drop
no offence to my fam cus like it was nice aint even gonna lie about it The stanza concept was sick |
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07-11-05, 02:09 PM | #24 | ||||
-Certified Dope-
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I agree the stanza shit was nice... but really you shoulda dropped something with a little more time an effort to make it really hit harder... i know im in raw... but really it was aight... id like to see some more though.. where u actually put ur best into it and are confident its your best... pz..
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07-11-05, 02:27 PM | #25 | ||||||
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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lmao that just sounds made up! like u just sed it to justify bad structure, because y would u 'fuck up the stanzas' if it was a diss to the whole of RAW?
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07-11-05, 02:40 PM | #26 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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Cus Stanzas a main member of R.A.W and it was a metaphor concept wich was v.creativ
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07-11-05, 06:41 PM | #27 | |||||
-Certified Dope-
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^^ genious that was a line from the verse..... u didn get it obviously... |
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07-15-05, 02:48 AM | #28 | ||||
everytime i rhyme...
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good looks on the feed..
maybe more to come been busy with work upp
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07-15-05, 04:00 AM | #29 | |||||||
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Aye yea It was hot I was likin the lines N everythang but you should came a lil bit stronger cause I really know how the beef started but It'll come into light some time but some back wit sum else do. Keep that shit up fam.
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07-15-05, 04:17 AM | #30 | |||||
(X) CeEding all Expectations
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This kid seveirely brain damaged???? wdf.???? u cant even mock or let alone rap for shit.??/
And 2nd why diss... u kno u hate us now... and in hte future.. if we decide to squash the shit ..we be all sweet then this garbage verse will be wasted??/ dnt u reckon... so why beef
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