Voted For: Maximus

Huh, second time I'm voting on a pen n paper battle today. Maximus, you had some alright lines, sort of used too many paper concepts.. But you were able to pull it off. Disses stayed decently constant, didnt really fall off.. It was good for a 10 minute verse. Jus needa work on more personal disses than name flips n ish. But yeah.

PNP, once again in this battle your lines were stretched, I feel bad about having to vote against you twice, but I'm just being honest bro.. Your concepts were better in this battle than the one before and one line stood out:
Maximus ur rhymes are tired and played out more then Freddy and Jason sequels

That was pretty decent.. But overall, maximus got the battle here for better punches and lines that wernt stretched.
Peace.

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

dope battle right here y'all...

Maximus:-

Good drop, few bars could of been worded alot better...that was youre main an prolly only flaw in the verse

Wordplay was aight, nothin too complex, but it was okay, punches hit for the most part, propps on that brainstorming personal, good play off the name....wasnt feelin youre closer, that horny shit was a lil gay an seemed kinda childish, but for the most part ya verse was cool stuff man.
6.5/10

Pen n paper

decent verse, wordplay an the flow was far superior, need to work on youre punchlines a little....structure was good an easy to follow, each bar was worded a hell of alot better than maximus, good disses an personals too, ya verse was fiyah man, real nice drop.
8/10

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^dude just likes to piss me off...................

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No i vote honestly

i never hate vote, i'm not as petty as you, son.

an plus pen n paper just left my crew, so he';s an unloyal bastard that i aint cool with, i voted for who i thought won

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