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WiseWun 1 16.67%
Kordozar 5 83.33%
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Old 07-28-05, 12:43 AM   #1
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korz took this easy. even though wisewun did have some nice vocab and punches i just thought korz came at it with a much more crafty approach there was nothing really wrong with his drop partially because he had the metaphors right the set up on "Grab A Nicotene Because Your Rhymes Are Not Somethin You Smoke To
Done!Now Watch This Kid Keep Quiet Without Me Stranglin His Vocals" could have been a little better but overall a nice verse..
wisewun you had a nice verse i just think you need to elevate alot more before you can come up against someone of this calibur. you had nice vocab yes but the punches and structure were weak overall work on that..

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Old 07-31-05, 03:16 AM   #2
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Old 08-07-05, 10:44 PM   #3
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i also felt wisewun's lines were streeeeeetched as fuck...and didnt have a very good read
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Old 08-08-05, 02:55 AM   #4
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Grab A Nicotene Because Your Rhymes Are Not Somethin You Smoke To
Done!Now Watch This Kid Keep Quiet Without Me Stranglin His Vocals

Lmao! Good Shit Man One Sided Battled You Ripped This Kid No Doubt

Son..Your Lyrics are trash,and without a weapon you weak..
Wise'll will break "Kord/Chord In 2 Pieces" as if you ripped a "Tendon In Yah Knee!!"...

Meh Okay Good Wordplay Here

Overall Kord Got This
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