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Old 07-22-05, 12:33 PM   #16
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damn you talk alot of shit but after reading this you could prolly back it up cause this was nice an original
good vocab
liked the flow
liked the creativity
i enjoyed it
i give it the highest i ever gave anybody for there OM
i give it a 9.8/10

Can you R/F in one of my battles and eplain your vote it will be much appreciated
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Old 07-24-05, 06:07 PM   #17
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this is like ras kas..I like the story.....esp. this


~Straight from a bottomless pit,....Birthed from a army of six
Spawned a problem within,...A dark consceince that sinned
He promised hes sick, So twisted he'd spit an vomit on kids
He's like a glitch in a document print, Makin the copier shift
Harnesting the darkest of sins,...This kid is obviously a prick
Everyone wishin he'd prolly just quit, but his pain is ageless
Contained and sacred, His brain is basically based on hatred
If he keeps pacing his frame he'd break it, his face is greyish
He's just another face thats nameless, This lame's just basic
His rage is caged in, It's outragous, how hes stays insane an
Slaved to hatred, He paints the pages, that'll end his chapter
So he trys to repente to pastors, clearin the sins he raptured
But It just doesn't happen,...As quick as he did the bad work
So now hes pissed an badgured, Wishing he did it backwards
But hes to bussy dishin bad words, constantly dissin rappers
Always from distant platforms, mixtures of evil hurt em badly
Diffirent of people murked em nasty,he derserv'd the act see
Actually worse then that heat,... But now his words are fancy
Hes worth the happy, so he got baptise on a church's balcony~

^^^this was a really good drop,10/10^^^

1st verse was nice...Really nice...

*Another rapper gone, vanished,captured by his own lyrics
Shattered his own spirit, what kinda disasterous soul is this
When every pastor an pope fears it?

^^10/10...that was deep,made me read it twice...^^^
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