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07-30-05, 05:46 PM
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Voted For: T.r.oo.P
man...this was one-sided as fuck FLow-Troop....still motion had some lines too long and some too short.Troops structure was better.Both had a basic rhyme scheme and need to improve in that. Content-Troop....still motion needs to use bigger words and shit.He was simple.No dope metas nor mothing.Troop was all that either...but still a lil above average Vote-TRoop VOTE IN LINK BELOW http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202287 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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07-30-05, 08:26 PM
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07-30-05, 09:33 PM
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^^rtf pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeee..........................
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07-31-05, 09:14 PM
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08-01-05, 03:30 PM
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08-02-05, 02:31 AM
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08-02-05, 02:00 PM
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08-02-05, 03:13 PM
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Voted For: T.r.oo.P
ummmm Still u didnt stick to the topic at all man.. V/ TROOP for better vocab flow and sticking to the story Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-02-05, 04:25 PM
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Still didnt stick to the topic his vocab was a lil newbish and I didnt like the way his flow was set uot..while TROOPS was the opposite
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08-02-05, 04:31 PM
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Cam some one explain what was newbish about my vocab.... And how didnt I stick to topic? Pleas explain.
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08-02-05, 04:37 PM
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In my opinion T.r.o.o.p has dis one not by a long shot though it was a close battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-02-05, 11:14 PM
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08-03-05, 04:36 PM
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08-03-05, 07:26 PM
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VOTE: SM. his verse just touched my mind a little more. made me think a bit harder. i really liked the way the concept was flipped. you had an amazing use of vocab and some really nice descriptives here. the problem, to me, with the other verse was that it wasnt a good development of the idea. too much emphasis was put on the eating sheets and not the why or how etc... VOTE: SM |
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08-03-05, 10:54 PM
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