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Old 08-01-05, 01:03 AM   #16
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^ Nice wordplay. Allow me to be the teacher on this one.

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excuseX me but You're X not smart worth a fart boy X if X you can't put that verse together X (YOU SERIOUS??) damn teacher must've been a broken leg horse dumb fuck


Correction: Excuse me boy, but you're not smart worth a fart. If you can't put that verse together then you're damn teacher must've been a dumb fucking horse with a broken leg.

Why don't you pick up a fucking book because you're talking like a fucking retard.
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cats call me whack but can't come with tall fact its all an act to cover the truth, i got a trademark but you afraid of the dark pussy, not a hood survivor just wood fibers to be popped and chopped by an ax you not hot on wax likke famous rappers
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Old 08-01-05, 01:46 AM   #17
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vague you try look down bu tjust a shook clown that can't rhyme worth a fuck
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Old 08-01-05, 02:19 AM   #18
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fucka topical. ima kick it text on this clown. i should pink slip your ass on an ip bann, i dont even do text and id STILL fuck you up, clown.

*turns om into a cypher*

Madd, quit the keystylin', you're just buildin' my herb resistence
I'd toss a verse of personals, but your sig sums up your existence
I'll leave you missin, like your cock when you go to stand up
You'd get beat hands down, but the cops told your dad hands up!
Seriously enough's enough, just like any word's a word.
But a herb's a herb, and you're rehearsin' the same verse!
I don't know what's worse, your diss tracks or your comebacks
...If I wanted MY cum back I'd wipe it off your gum flaps!
Sticky this shit, seriously... but not to the back of your throat
Cope with being "Less"..... yeah it makes sense.... You're lost "hope"!
And your quotes... are the most stupid shit since Mr. Hanky.
But my siggy, is promoting your rhymes so really, you should thank me.

Bitch.
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cats call me whack but can't come with tall fact its all an act to cover the truth, i got a trademark but you afraid of the dark pussy, not a hood survivor just wood fibers to be popped and chopped by an ax you not hot on wax likke famous rappers

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Old 08-01-05, 02:24 AM   #19
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yo man....this ....im speechless...breathtaking wonderfull peace right here.......nothing to complain about..........everything is good.......10/10........i love it lol......but do me a favor and give me feedback on mine...so an advanced rapper like you can teach me a lesson
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Old 08-01-05, 02:31 AM   #20
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^yeah wat he said dis was a good piece had nice vocab and imargery the emotion was dere completly and ya structure was decent which is always good nice drop keep droppin pieces like dis 9/10

RTF wud be very appreciated
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Old 08-01-05, 02:39 AM   #21
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taz i wish you hadn't responded to mine now man you don't know a fucking thing about rap advanced rapper nigga you shitting me just name one rapper that rhyme with no atrtitude like this fucking lopsided tramp right here just name one
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Old 08-01-05, 02:48 AM   #22
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attitude? what in the blue fucking hell are you talking about? do i have to go to boot camp to merk your ass? no. stfu and never come back here again.

edit: fucking pussy, this is maddrapper judging a battle:

"OHHH DAMN SLIM! Nice earrings! You got tats and everything! Ohhh wowwwwww let me suck your DICK! You're so SEXY! Oh My Godddd, You ever gotten a speeding ticket?!"

"...Ummm Yeah..."

"Oh FUCCKKKK THATS HOTTT!" *nuts his pants* "I vote for YOU!"

Get a fucking life outside the internet. You probably gave your mom attitude once because she didn't do your laundry and you probably got a smack upside your bitch head. Pfff.
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cats call me whack but can't come with tall fact its all an act to cover the truth, i got a trademark but you afraid of the dark pussy, not a hood survivor just wood fibers to be popped and chopped by an ax you not hot on wax likke famous rappers

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Old 08-01-05, 08:54 AM   #23
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Jesus mad, choose an LL head to pink slip you.

Any will so it, your fuckin nuts.
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Old 08-01-05, 11:27 PM   #24
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i want toooo...give me a mission im daubs im bored
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Old 08-01-05, 11:30 PM   #25
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I liked this Verse, Pretty Much decent in the category "Imagery". Very easily being portrait in my mind. Vocab was overall decent...Flow was good, and good having shorter Lines. The concept was overall "Dope" The approach of it is what made this piece so Appealing to me..Decent Drop here.

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Old 08-05-05, 12:07 PM   #26
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Yo!.....................
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Old 08-05-05, 01:29 PM   #27
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Ay man, check crews n collabs forum^^

\\i want you in a topical battle man.
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Old 08-05-05, 02:21 PM   #28
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definately strong imagery...ima read it again later, cause i just dipped through it.....word

spelt disappearing wrong though
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