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08-09-05, 03:03 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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sick one better watch out, maddrapper might skull fuck you lol
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08-09-05, 11:41 PM
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BeAnToWN rEp
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woa^^^^^....kinda weird........uppin
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08-10-05, 03:41 PM
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BeAnToWN rEp
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sum feed wuld be nice....uppin
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08-13-05, 02:17 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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everything was iight man up on structure vocab multis u=mad potential...but battle me dawg newbie vs. newbie
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09-28-05, 07:52 PM
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Bringin The Rukas
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need to work on the structure need to elevate just a little bit on the vocab
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09-28-05, 07:56 PM
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...Liven Proof...
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needs better structure, wordplay, imagery...wasnt feelin it all that much but it was decent jus work on those points i mentioned and u'll be aight kid
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09-29-05, 02:40 PM
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Light Weight
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Not bad man i liked it the end was a little corny but it was ight
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09-29-05, 03:03 PM
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This is my first post!
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Kinda Sloppy Structured and whateeva But Your Theory (Shall I Say) was Alright
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