Voted For: Natural killa

Natural Killa got this...
Why?,you ask.

Well here's tha Breakdown "KIDS!"

Killa's verse:

line(1)-he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
^^^^^^There was no multi's,no good flow of words,and the punch was lackin....but it was a punch.Personal was a personal..at least you had one. 2/10

line(2)-im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
^^^^^Nice punch...I like that one,tha first line was okay at best,but tha last line with tha punch was nice.7/10

line(3)-wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
^^^^okay punch...not nothing really new,but it was nice wordplay lil multi's in it...like I said tha punch was aiight.5/10

lines(4)-Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin
^^^^Weak and was hard ta spit it..maybe tha way I would've flow'd it and tha way you would spit it might make a lil diff.Still weak for a closer.But it was a punch(Eh..tap.)2/10

In all tha structure was off,and tha 1st and 4th line was weak.At least you came wit punch's,and a few multi's,a lil wordplay,and that 2nd line.It made tha whole 2 weak lines fade away.

6.5/10-


Now ladies an Gentle-men..Here's tha breakDown 4 Kamze!
Hold on ta ur Seat Folks,Cuz this ones a Scorcher.




Kamze-

line(1)-Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
^^^That was no punch,Real weak...an almost personal,and had no wordplay or multi's...1/10

line(2)-All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
^^^Weak..didnt rhyme at all..real throwback ass punch..0/10

line(3)-You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability',
^^^^A PUNCH!!!:smile:..finally!..but,it was another throwback line..heard it before an done better...3/10

line(4)-My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.
^^^^yet again,self glory is not the intention's of a battle..Damn,You at least rhymed this one,no multi's, good structure.Weak line tho'...2/10

2/10 overall for Kamze's verse...You need ta elevate sum more,cuz there was no punch but 1,an that 1 was weak and played out!

my vote goes for KILLA....

Tha battle was weak 2 me....but Killa got it.

please return favor an vote on my battles in my sig!:thumbsup:

^^^Lmao...thx for voting...and i'll return the favor.............bump

Voted For: Kamze

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Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,



n.k. work on ur punches & ur wordin to it.. cuz ur whole verse was
garbage.. add some personas in there.. work on ur flow.. and other
shit to make ur verse better.. so overall.. elevate more

kamze.. ur punches were all that great either.. the flow needs work
..the structure was stretched, shorten it a little bit.. and add some
personas in ur rhymes to make the battle more funnier & whatnot
but overall u took this one, cuz n.k. came weaker than u in this

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Voted For: Kamze

Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
—decent opener, could’ve been a little harder & ya could’ve switched it up
All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
—meh, this line is sorta played here, but it connected
You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability',
—nah, not feeling this punch
My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.
—weak closer


he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
—wack opener, schumck as the last word? ..no son
im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
—weak punch, could’ve made this harder than that
wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
—almost, but it wasn’t decent either
Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin
—sayin & same.. meh they hardly rhyme here

overall this battle was weak.. both structures need work.. the flow
practically needs some help on that, didn’t see any personas up in
both ur verses, but overall Kamze took this one.. punches came
harder.. even though you both have the same rating.. Kamze took
this battle w/ punches that weren’t as wack

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Voted For: Natural killa

look heres da breakdown:
flow:killa
creativty:killa
punches:killa
personals:none(none worth mentioning)
meta:>>>>>>>>>>>>^^^^^^^^^^
overall:killa

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

Ay yo, why did sik wit it's vote get dq'd and blackfrostbite's didn't. This is a joke the voting.

^^^Well go get it removed.......uppin 4 votes..............

man i like the line about a fade haircut plus i see that you know what you're gonna talk about but you had a weak openin' but you did good keep it up

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Voted For: Natural killa

natural killa took this battle. kamze's verse was all broken up n shit. he didnt have alot of punches that did anything really.
also "people" and "animals" dont rhyme so you aint get points for that bar really. Also kamze's opener and closer were kinda weak.
Natural Killa's verse was decent some ok metas in there and alot better flow in the verse. He took the opener and closer cuz his punches were a lil bit better.

Kamze's best bar=
My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'
(ehh this was not too hot especially for ya closer, work on that)

Natural killas best bar=im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
(this was ok, pretty decent bar. it was my favorite of the battle)
my vote goes to Natural Killa

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