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Old 08-06-05, 05:26 PM   #16
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NVM, i thought you were...

but trini wasnt even half decent.

NVM.
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Old 08-06-05, 05:39 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by Natural killa
Come at you with beef?....beef is offline homie...shit...you niggas take this net shit too seriously...

And...yes...battling is not ALL about multis.But the thing is...battling has many elements.Not just punches.Flow,punches,creativity,complexity...etc.B ased on what you said...could we just use dope wordplay and such with stretched lines?No...it's not like that.

Punches are the most important part.But combine them with multis...and you got something even better.Multis are used to enhance flow.And my shit is easy HuH?That what you saying?well....tell me this...is rhyming killa/gorilla...single/pringle easier than rhying swing some slackness/king of whackness...aviation schools/medication fools

Yeah..I didn't used any internals.....and I use multis at the end of my lines...but that's my style.Your style is that 50 cent basic rhyme scheme.Go look at the other verses around here and you'll see that your style is the same as the newbs.And I use hypens to point them out to help out newbs....but apperantley(taz)...some are too stupuid.

Shit....only on RV would one sllyable rhyming be accepted...go peep battles on RB,B-Boys,or RM...



^^Please tell me what this nigga is talking about?


first of all, i did not say this verse was any good, but it does beat yours.

second, i don't really use multies in verses, i only really use them in writing songs or pieces....you even said it yourself
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Multis are used to enhance flow

so why would i use it in a diss, when i could spend more time with creativity, originality, and actual good punches.

third, yes, your rhyming is simple......king of whackness, bring some slackness or whatever you put, is not fucking hard to do, thats basic shit.

and lastly, i am not new here, so stfu, i'd own you any day.

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Old 08-06-05, 06:01 PM   #18
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Old 08-06-05, 08:24 PM   #19
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Quote:
Originally Posted by veyetal
first of all, i did not say this verse was any good, but it does beat yours.

second, i don't really use multies in verses, i only really use them in writing songs or pieces....you even said it yourself

so why would i use it in a diss, when i could spend more time with creativity, originality, and actual good punches.

third, yes, your rhyming is simple......king of whackness, bring some slackness or whatever you put, is not fucking hard to do, thats basic shit.

and lastly, i am not new here, so stfu, i'd own you any day.

word.




Your verse beats mine you saying now?Hmm...so after one bogus verse from someone who clearly didn't read the verse....you gettin all excited.Just goes to show you an egotistical peice a shit.

And why use multis in disses?...well....how about to *gasp*...make it better????

I neva said you were new..read my post again...I simply said that your rhyme shceme was newbish...which is true.

Quote:
Originally Posted by veyetal
if you can understand this without coming at me with beef........


And then you saying you own me and to stfu?...funny how before you told me try to reply without the beef....and now you say that shit.And ussualy...in an arguement...the one to diss first is the one who knows he lost.But wateva..I'm done with you and your ego.

So I had no internals and used multis too basic?...well thank you...I will use that feedback to improve.Unlike you...I don't have an ego.

I'm done arguing pointlessly with your stubborn ass.Here's a tip....get your head outta your own ass.

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Old 08-06-05, 10:31 PM   #20
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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural killa - Good spit, punches were hitten hard. You had a good flow in there also.

Best Line - you name making as much sense,as seein Trinidad swing-some-slackness
and ur user title is incomplete,cause u the 'original' king-of-whackness*

Worst Line - location's out n about,cause u constantly get kicked out,always be motoring
cause nobody ever ask(ax) for you,like some faggots to the deoderant

veyetal - Iight spit, you had some ok punches and your flow was good.

Best Line - like autumn leaves, he falls to the ground as soon as i shake'em
and im not talking about his sig.......when i'll easily rakim

Worst Line - its not natural, but i'll monkey around with this killa
take the k out of his name, cause im about to gore-illa

OVERALL - This battle was close but I think NK took this one, he had the better flow and harder punches. The other guy just needs some more creative shit.

Vote - Natural killa
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Old 08-06-05, 11:31 PM   #21
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Old 08-07-05, 01:40 AM   #22
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seriously you stupid fuck, i've had enough of you, YOU'RE NOT FUCKING THAT GREAT AT ALL, barely average, i use this alias to piss around, because thats all i do on here, is fuck around.....but seriously, you're garbage, and you obviously tried since you're taking offence to your bullshit verse, but if you wanna real battle, i'll fucking demo you on this name, and i'll try, because i seriously wrote that verse in 5 minutes, talking on the phone to my gf, so fuck yourself buddy.......you ain't shit at all, stop talking like that verse was good

i'll even crush the fuck outta you in topicals, now step the fuck up, or shut the fuck up

people like you who ruin RV.......and yes, you are k-trini, you are identical to him in every aspect.......fucktard
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Old 08-07-05, 11:40 AM   #23
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Old 08-07-05, 12:43 PM   #24
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you're the biggest fucking retard on this site

why should i pm you for a battle, lets battle pink slip fucker.
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Old 08-07-05, 01:32 PM   #25
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I knew it all along ............

For drak and trini.
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Old 08-07-05, 01:43 PM   #26
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Voted For: Natural killa

its not natural, but i'll monkey around with this killa
take the k out of his name, cause im about to gore-illa
^^^ight opener...basic
like autumn leaves, he falls to the ground as soon as i shake'em
and im not talking about his sig.......when i'll easily rakim
^^^That was a Good personal....
your whack rhymes multiply every verse, you'll never have a single
cause once you drop, the shit don't stop...like rip offs of pringles
^^^IGht nuthin special
but this match is over, stab ya over and over, leave ya ripped
they say ask for a miracle and expect one...and ya just got whipped
^^^Played heard it million times changed

you name making as much sense,as seein Trinidad swing-some-slackness
and ur user title is incomplete,cause u the 'original' king-of-whackness*
^^^Good opener nice Personal...
he reppin an eagle pointlessly,shit,worse than all them mediation-fools
but u seemed to have lost ya wings,like someone robbed aviation-schools**
^^^Nice Personal Agian Good punch....
location's out n about,cause u constantly get kicked out,always be motoring
cause nobody ever ask(ax) for you,like some faggots to the deoderant
^^^Ight.......Not really a hard hittin punch
beat some newb,but after me you fall apart,like I did some-screw-pumping
and this ass join living legend in hopes of finnaly gettin a clue-to something**
^^^Good Closer wit the Personal.......

V/Natural Killa......this was an ight battle both came wit some good punchs....But vey u came wit some played lines that weren't originial...
Killa u had good personals that were consistent u most of ur verse was had good punchs an wordplay......No Hate V/NK
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Old 08-07-05, 02:44 PM   #27
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OK...^^thx for voting young blaze


and duabs and drakel?....wtf y'all niggas babbling about here...shit...get out of my battle thread please...
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Old 08-07-05, 03:32 PM   #28
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this is my battle thread, dumbass

and young blaze knows nothing, thats why he was only LW champion
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Old 08-07-05, 05:56 PM   #29
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somebody fuckin vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-07-05, 08:57 PM   #30
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uppin 4 votes.....................................
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