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Old 08-11-05, 06:23 AM   #16
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ight man i posted man real........ill pm you for the collab foe holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha man when i get my mic homie ill let ya know whats really up wit my audio skillz
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Old 08-11-05, 06:38 AM   #17
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This was another decent drop, again it was packed with emotion and had decent imagery, lyrically it was decent, structure is messy but its strate cause it looks like the text for an audio version.

You should do it audio, good piece.
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Old 08-11-05, 06:54 AM   #18
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man all i need is a mic man and i am poor like a muthafucka so i have to wait for a hile man real.........but man thanks for the feed again man and i RTF on ur battle wit PI and shit man i will drop and audio soon as i get a damn mic..............i demostrate my verbal skillz
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Old 08-11-05, 10:02 AM   #19
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diz piece here was hot i liked it alot u put it down wit lots of emotion, creativity was definately there structure was on point also, continue 2 drop ya pieces cuz u got alot of potential
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Old 08-11-05, 10:20 AM   #20
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man payn man thanks especially to hear from trigga....man RAW and TRIGGA aint on the same terms but man i aint into that beefin shit so i really appriciate you droppin feed man cuz my crew cant even drop feed for me so thanks man peace...............
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Old 08-11-05, 10:51 AM   #21
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Good shit yo, hope she b aiightt......flow was on point, i felt it fa real.........stay up
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ayo foe thanks and can ya spread the werd homie i would really appriciate it man real
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Old 08-11-05, 11:08 AM   #23
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oh yeah can u do me a favor also & drop sum feed in my piece

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204043
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aight man..............ayo i did drop i think but yea i will
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Old 08-11-05, 12:16 PM   #25
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Damn thats hott...i like ya OM sho...maybe u shud do a OM for Easing The Pain
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well this wasnt too good

i see the topic and i feel for u but this lyrically wasnt too great..kinda basic..nothing spectacular that stood out..ya flow was alright but at times kinda went off..overall i would give this a 7.
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Very sweet piece..congratualations on ya baby girl...
anyways..
good emotion and good flow...good structure, yu already know...
i like the whole concept and the everything..up da vocab a lil and this is a perfect score...

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thanks peeps for yall feed man really appriciate it and comin soon in OM is my new one called are u feelin me?! its gon be hot man and one ccalled marijuana so ill post it later peace
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Old 08-12-05, 05:36 PM   #29
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DAYYUUMM great peice...strong emotion...good way you structured this peice..this was really good...up ure vocab a lil and this would be an eazee OM of the month, rlly dope peice...

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aight homie sure think homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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