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IP: D40E 67D5
ight man i posted man real........ill pm you for the collab foe holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha man when i get my mic homie ill let ya know whats really up wit my audio skillz
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This was another decent drop, again it was packed with emotion and had decent imagery, lyrically it was decent, structure is messy but its strate cause it looks like the text for an audio version.
You should do it audio, good piece.
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IP: D40E 67D5
man all i need is a mic man and i am poor like a muthafucka so i have to wait for a hile man real.........but man thanks for the feed again man and i RTF on ur battle wit PI and shit man i will drop and audio soon as i get a damn mic..............i demostrate my verbal skillz
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diz piece here was hot i liked it alot u put it down wit lots of emotion, creativity was definately there structure was on point also, continue 2 drop ya pieces cuz u got alot of potential
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man payn man thanks especially to hear from trigga....man RAW and TRIGGA aint on the same terms but man i aint into that beefin shit so i really appriciate you droppin feed man cuz my crew cant even drop feed for me so thanks man peace...............
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Good shit yo, hope she b aiightt......flow was on point, i felt it fa real.........stay up
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IP: D40E 67D5
ayo foe thanks and can ya spread the werd homie i would really appriciate it man real
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oh yeah can u do me a favor also & drop sum feed in my piece
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204043
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IP: D40E 67D5
aight man..............ayo i did drop i think but yea i will
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Damn thats hott...i like ya OM sho...maybe u shud do a OM for Easing The Pain
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IP: 2029 97B3
well this wasnt too good
i see the topic and i feel for u but this lyrically wasnt too great..kinda basic..nothing spectacular that stood out..ya flow was alright but at times kinda went off..overall i would give this a 7. |
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Very sweet piece..congratualations on ya baby girl... anyways.. good emotion and good flow...good structure, yu already know... i like the whole concept and the everything..up da vocab a lil and this is a perfect score... 9/10 Chuuch Defyned
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IP: D40E 67D5
thanks peeps for yall feed man really appriciate it and comin soon in OM is my new one called are u feelin me?! its gon be hot man and one ccalled marijuana so ill post it later peace
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DAYYUUMM great peice...strong emotion...good way you structured this peice..this was really good...up ure vocab a lil and this would be an eazee OM of the month, rlly dope peice...
RTF to my desperation....
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
aight homie sure think homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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