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08-15-05, 07:33 PM
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flows are okay..speats a lil more polished
but all the levels were too loud deamp em not a bad track and the beat was entertaining 1 |
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08-15-05, 07:38 PM
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IP: 66E1 CAE5
thanks..I aint got an amp lol....
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08-15-05, 10:16 PM
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Champion
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IP: DB3C 953E
uppin this............
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08-15-05, 11:44 PM
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IP: 554C 7528
iight cool uppin
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08-15-05, 11:58 PM
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ok......
Speats verse....u could work on your flow a lil bit...lyrically it was ok...quality isnt too good...sometimes it seems like it a lil loud...then goes back down...delivery was decent...youve mos def gotten better..... Hook...was coo...it wasnt extremely great...but it was kinda catchy..prolly best part of song... Inters verse....you gotta pretty good flow...quality isnt too good...u need to work on the mixing....lyrically it was ok...nothin spectacular....delivery was pretty good too....you got potential man....just up that quality.. Where the F did u get that beat though?....its dope as shit...... but...RTF....on my song....Soccer Kids Diss.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204544 thanks
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08-16-05, 02:24 AM
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IP: 0225 ED93
my flow wasint good??? lol wtf, anyway thanks man
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08-16-05, 02:38 AM
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nah your flow was on ok...you could just touch it up a lil bit...it hit the snare and everything ok....but i think it could be just a lil more smooth sounding..and it would be dope.....
same thing with Inter...his was off a lil more than yours...i know i didnt say that the first time i posted...but he seems like he is rushing some of his words a lil.... but Speats....if you just polished yours a lil bit....it would be dope as shit...you should get a new mic since youve elevated...so they quality can be good...itll just make you that much better... and where the hell did you get this beat? i love it
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08-16-05, 04:37 AM
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Champion
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IP: CC3A 4FC5
Thanks alot man, I really appreciate what you said.....
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08-16-05, 08:35 AM
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IP: 6F83 5F84
upppppin.............
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08-16-05, 10:29 AM
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speats.. you need to sort your vocal levels out... lol flow is ite.. you've deffinatly got better dilvery is kool... overall not bad, hook is pretty decent your my new hook man. intermanl flow is pretty decent, you need more emotion deilvery is a bit meh but your deffo elevating. hook agen like it..pretty catchy track pretty decent mate keep it up |
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08-16-05, 10:32 AM
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Champion
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IP: 3A64 90A8
thanks man really appreciate
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08-16-05, 12:22 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 0B98 4D18
thanks man, and invektive, i found it on soundclick somewere lol really really deeep on soundclick
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08-16-05, 06:50 PM
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IP: 37BA F453
one more time..
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08-17-05, 04:24 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Holla.....
like the beat right off the bat....where did you get that? I want the beat..... hahah....dude is funny.....got me rollin..... voice sounds kinda like Mr. Boxcutta....nice... 2nd dude is tight too....but his stuff is sounded all super wackly produced.....static-super ....yea, that was some funny material.......keep up -E to tha T |
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08-17-05, 04:37 PM
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Champion
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IP: 35C9 5171
thanks............
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