Originally Posted by Natural killa

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I battled Tha Q n am winnin right now 2-1...n that one vote for him was unexplained n d/r...but I'ma leave it.

Originally Posted by Mysteri

Voted For: Tha Q.

NK-you had nice as personals with punches to follow up ur gettin betta with ya wordplay that 2nd line was sick you had an nice openerbut you had a lot of strected bars so it kinda messed up ya flow and ya structure was fucked but the personals was crazy good

Tha Q-You had nice personals to and your punches hit harder then NK your strucuture was neat also your flow was good ya opener was ok cudda been betta but like 1 or 2 of ya punches didnt make sense but i still felt like u did betta den NK thats y mah vote goes to you

Originally Posted by Mysteri

dats mah vote fo Tha Q it was clearly explained so get da fuck outta here

mah vote was explained u jus a bitch it wudda been 2-2 but ya punk ass dq kordozar vote n it was explained u jus a bitch about it and hate to lose u faggot

Originally Posted by Natural killa

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...739#post2374739

^^post 977

Even strobe fuckin said the vote was unexplained..if I wanted to...I could get it DQ'd...N if Kordozar's vote was explained...strobe wouldn't have removed it.
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Originally Posted by Mysteri

you lyin strobe neva said mah vote was unexplained or he wudda removed it dats jus like u sayin tha q said ya verse was bettah den his u a liar man get ova it

Originally Posted by Tha Q.

Aiyo...in my battle with Natural Killa, ya'll already DQ'ed 1 of my votes cuz u claimed it was unexplained when it was

now Black Queen just voted for me...I don't wanna hear no bullshit about unexplained votes...it was a clear vote...she preferred my punches...flow...etc...

dats says enough...

and Natural Killa threatenin to have it removed

daz some bull shit...
WTF kinda chicken coop yall runnin here?

I don't appreciate votes of mine Being DQ'ed when they are legitimate


daz all I gots ta say

If Natural Killa had wanted it removed, we'll probably remove it.. vote isn't adequately explained. Everything in the feedback is generic. Only semi-non generic item was mentioning the 2nd bar being "sick", but no backup on why it was. Didn't say which punches did not make sense, no examples of stretched bars, why certain personals were good, etc.

Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~

Your verse... since you so proud of beating Tha Q, an audio head... woo
I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out
but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum


-You couldn't be serious and battling Tha Q in text? Q don't even battle like he used to...

1. Your lines too damn long
2. You have no flow
3. where are your punches
4. your multis are elementary "calling me out... stalling me now" <the best you got?
5. Your attempt for flow are retarded "inner rhymes" which don't help. And you add several commas in your shit like you actually gonna pause in them long ass lines..
6. Your personals are wack as fuck.. that Benzino line been used against him before.
7. Your wordplay is elementary.. that "pre-rights" like a four year old know it all" line's gay.
8. Don't attempt metaphors if you can't use them properly.
9. Will-a-peer's worse now than she ever was... So you beatin her is no big thing, wow.
10. Technical is not a vet. Drakel has his good and bad days.
11. When you come back and tell me you beat 9th Degree, JTR, and maybe hotshh then maybe you have a case...
12. You can't even set up ONE punch properly outta that whole drop.

So stfu... and all you talk bout is cum, dicks and pussy and calling a gay person a homo, like it's gonna hurt his feelings when he open about it... lol @ the first bar being the best and the following 7 being ass.

I would vote for him just based off how ass your verse was.

Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~

-You couldn't be serious........

1. Your lines too damn long
2. You have no flow
3. where are your punches

11. When you come back and tell me you beat 9th Degree, JTR, and maybe hotshh then maybe you have a case...
12. You can't even set up ONE punch properly outta that whole drop.

Reading was once fundamental. I don't battle newbies... My breakdown is clearly why you a newbie.. "Battle me, lemme prove you wrong i have a whole bunch of shit to prove cuz i beat willapeer"... I'm tired of you talking. You not worth a win on my record, simple.

Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~

read my post again i broke it down better so you understand what i meant..

Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~

Can you not read, i told you to look at that post, Newbie.. my answers all over it. And your verse is an indication that you need to keep practicing before you talk hard shit. I don't battle newbies.. even ones that talk hard shit.. I peeped your bullshit, you have nothing to prove. And I don't want no wack person like you to put a Win on my record Point Blank Period. Get IT? When you learn what a punch is and how to create sup-par bars, then I'll know you elevated. ... lol @ who the fuck asked for your critique? Now you pissed when you were braggin bout beating someone and you have a shitty verse.. You just like talkin shit.. So keep yappin..

Originally Posted by ~Lady Fiya~

^You the one posted this thread... aka talkin shit saying "I can beat you Troop and Fiya but I want Troop first" blah blah blah "I beat Willapeer" so what? I did too to a point where she no-showed and I wasn't even real good then, i'm beating Tha Q, so what he's an audio head..... "Y'all assholes cuz y'all disagree with me in another thread! blah blah blah" so what, nigga go cry crocodile tears. Crying cuz you suck.. go elevate, newb.