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08-22-05, 12:59 AM
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Whys That?
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IP:
excersion in a word perversion in a herb so drunk we serving in reverse
new curse with a positive twist stay wise so we abolish the risk my knowledge is thick virtually literally never learnt off literaccy so critisize me but if this guy be in a position i see a desicions likley to imprison my glee im precision ryming but it isnt my scene to be given hydings in a minute ill be so legit but moneys allways running out of my life im doubting my strife could reverse me cause im going forward like im converting reverse's pushing life to the edge like im swerving curse's lyrical outburts making you shiver no mistaking i deliver at the point of perfection sending your mind diffrent directions like thoughts intersections ^^ keyd |
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08-22-05, 01:00 AM
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in your system
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trapped in a deranged realm, no one can ever describe
where pain overwhelms, lifes hard-pressed to survive possessed with lies, depressed i cry tears of doubt suppressed by my eyes, empty echoes, no one hears you shout all life is about to collapse, happiness turns to pain perhaps never feelin its warmth again, memories burn your brain crazy or sane? my consciousness is encaged by steel a manufactured illusion, yet my body is made to feel and its all too real, suffering slowly erodes my sanity fall to a kneel, comforting words explode to profanity how can it be, i kept it innocent, avoiding all crime betrayed by my thoughts, my content destroyed in time devoid of any signs, hope created just to taunt my existence swallowed by dark, followed my heart, never thought to resist it troubled from the start, but could never ask for assistance so the feelings of hate and confinement contiually persisted until i believed it was true, my soul caught and contained never thought or complained, but it cant be bought or regained someone ought to explain what to do, life isn't a game i lost myself, mind caved through...ended it with a shot to the brain i was detained in a world that was created from dreams where pain would curl around any reflecton that gleamed every breath taken it seemed always deflated with screams and the only form of help offered, was just outdated regimes its far more extreme, madness had infected my cognition never to be free again, my sanity had selected ignition death infested my vision, if only you saw it through my eyes my mind was a prision...... and the only escape was suicide ^ a while back a did that, i enjoy reading it.... or else this....http://community.rapverse.com/showt...661#post2347661
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08-22-05, 01:23 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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U fuckin skipped me homo.......
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08-22-05, 01:30 AM
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GG Haterz
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IP:
It was a child's story kind sort of. That was the reason I made it simple, thanks though.
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08-22-05, 01:32 AM
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I see dumb people
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lol iunno, ia in't do many topicals yet.
 gotta start soon. So i guess jus this verse from this collab i'm doin' wit Trip and SenseR on Trade it all pt. 2 beat.Now everytime I look at you, girl, I'm always mesmerized From your breast to your thighs, yes, you got the best of eyes You're always despised, by the other girls, why? You're so fly, you could make a pimp guy to be shy I can try to deny, but you gotta spell on me I won't lie, yes, you're my, type of girl, come yell at me It be my dream, see, if "I love you", you're tellin' me Cuz the way you stole my heart, girl, it could be a felony Now... girl, you kno that I'll always treat you right For the rest of my life, I'd love to great you as my wife Everynight, it's a fight, losin' you is far on mind Cuz a gem like you, in this field, was hard to find ...In my eyes, you're my Queen, hope you kno that No girl is on your level, or the one below that You're a gift from above, you're the best see Cuz everytime I look "atchuu"... god blessed me props in advance for the time. 
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KORV 2 Final 4 KORV 0 and KORV 3 Champion First 1-2-1 champ 3x Best Audio collaboration... (August '05-October '05) |
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08-22-05, 01:44 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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I told you I'd get bored of this pretty quick.. I'ma take a break and maybe do more later.. And fux, I refuse to critique lyrics bittin off that dumb kid's show..
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08-24-05, 05:53 AM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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o heyall naw mafucka, i know u aint just gon stop tellin people bout they verses without doin mine
werd
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R.I.P. EAZY-E  MoBB Squad
 REST IN PEACE MY MUTHAPHUKKIN SPICCA OMB!!!
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08-24-05, 06:23 AM
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Whys That?
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*waits for nos to take a look at my effortless key*
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08-24-05, 06:29 AM
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Odi et Amo
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Whenever you find time...
When the revolution comes... As a devil's pact, claim it as a fact and don't even ask Putting up an act behind a mask when it's their own task Chosen those routes with true music as forbidden fruits Armani suits, scared to bring hip hop back to its roots Dwelling on fame, focused on making name in the game Isn't it a shame what became of passion they claimed? So the amount of guns does not define you as an artist Because it's not about who the toughest or the hardest Expressing depths of your soul, making yourself a whole Don't play role, be the one in control and reach your goal When the revolution comes... Trusting upon a higher power as the world turns so sour In society’s darkest hour bombs keep dropping to devour Innocent lives, soldiers fight away from children and wives Hearts filled with strife, nuclear weapons, no more knives Killing on command with blood of brothers on their hands No time to demand as they lose souls in no man’s lands Fighting in high disbelief while stealing lives as mere thief With no place for grief, only hear strong orders of a chief Thousand dreams left undone, silenced by sound of guns No more daughter or son, mothers weep more than once When the revolution comes… Gone is compassion, only interested in cash and fashion Bash and slash em, just hatred, no more love or passion Even when the tide gets high with no more room to hide They never swallow their pride and switch to another side Powerful powders stashed: a big fish they’re out to catch Sex and no strings attached as some things never match Erupting fights between red and blue or black and white That fill us with fright as we witness such an awful sight Too blinded by the color of a skin to notice what’s within When in life we seem to begin completely free of any sin They always say to be patient …When the revolution comes… …Everything will be different… I don’t want to wait anymore
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08-24-05, 06:47 AM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP:
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there, thought id fix it up a bit fo u, no need 2 thank me, im always here 2 lent a helping hand werd
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R.I.P. EAZY-E MoBB Squad
REST IN PEACE MY MUTHAPHUKKIN SPICCA OMB!!!
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08-24-05, 07:28 AM
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Odi et Amo
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Posted to get some constructive feedback, not for some bullshit from superficial low-life assholes.
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08-24-05, 08:12 AM
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**the council**
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yo you got beef with dq..........
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08-24-05, 07:19 AM
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Stre'T Dream'R
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Choir boy tellin the preacher how to preach.
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08-24-05, 07:48 AM
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Middle Weight
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^kolby will kill your dog for that remark
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08-24-05, 07:51 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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$20 says I'll never get around to doing any more..
Maybe if I had nothing better to do... But unfortunatly... I do.. |
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