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08-28-05, 11:38 AM
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lol...........someone vote please.................
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08-30-05, 07:32 AM
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08-30-05, 08:55 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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08-31-05, 08:17 AM
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09-01-05, 09:20 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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09-01-05, 10:54 AM
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wow.....................uppin this....................
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09-05-05, 06:14 AM
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09-07-05, 11:48 AM
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09-09-05, 06:27 AM
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09-09-05, 10:37 PM
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Voted For: mizz fyre
Metafo'-hmm...decent peice here.Saw the whole 3 different stories thing you did too.The best one was the 3rd one...cuz it was something we could relate to more.Best thing you had in ur verse was the transition.Line after line seemed to come after one another smoothly.Nothing really creative here.I thought the discription and all..was a bit..basic.Like...the stories I think needed some sort of twist or someting.Cuz it seemed to be missing something tho..as storylines go. Mizz Frye-Lmao..stan-like verse here.I like the concept tho..about mother and son thingy.But really..the song stan made the whole letter/death at end thing a lil bland.Had some stretched lines in there too.But i liked the way you described ur lines and put it together.Seemed more complex and elaborate.Just work on flow and shit. Close topical battle here...but.. Vote-Mizz Frye RTF BELOW......(it's topical as well  )http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909 |
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09-11-05, 01:57 PM
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^^^thanx.......finally gettin some votes in here lol......uppin
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09-12-05, 08:08 AM
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upppin this.......................................
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09-12-05, 05:23 PM
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upppin this.......................................
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09-13-05, 09:50 AM
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Voted For: mizz fyre
Close battle Metafo'-You came pretty good structure was aight could have been better i didnt really see any vocab here though witch is not nessacary but it helps im not seein the imaginary though tha verse looked like a whole bunch of rhymin words just thrown into a structured format gotta make that shit mean suttin dawg know what im sayin tha set up of your verse was good though decent drop..pz Mizz fyre-Structure on this is better than ive seen in your previous topicals so good job had some vocab witch is good had a good story not tha greatest imaginary but it got tha job done always room for improvement feel me...you kept me intrested in tha story though so thats why i gotta give this to you good job to both though pz... Vote/Mizz Fyre
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09-17-05, 01:40 PM
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^^^thanx....uppin.................................
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