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Old 08-29-05, 06:04 PM   #16
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Old 08-30-05, 08:59 PM   #17
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Old 08-31-05, 10:27 PM   #18
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New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry
Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See
4...good flow but weak punch
6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star
You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars
5....weak n kinda basic
I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First
Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse
6..that car/retire shit is played tho

Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there,
like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were
3..ok first..the set-up was stupuid and flame/fame is not wordplay..it has to be homophones to be wordplay..plus it didn't rhyme
battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off,
make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off.
2...not a punch....and u rhyming the same words
think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it,
like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid.
5...ur best bar

New edition...you need some work.That 1st bar..too many problems.First..flame/fame..for it to be wordplay..it needs to be homophones.Not just similar sounding.So that was forced.And the bar didn't rhyme(there,were).The 2nd bar..not much of a punch..more like self glorifing..and u rhymed the same word.3rd bar was actually a punch...but it was weak.

No hate....honest opinion
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Old 09-01-05, 12:31 AM   #19
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Voted For: Torch.

New Edition
Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there,
like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were
^Forced rhyme didnt diss him neither 0/10^
battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off,
make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off.
^was iight but still didnt hit hard 4/10^
think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it,
like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid.
^no.....bad closer 0/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was nothing, u had no punches not even self glor. u were just ramboling on about nothing....next battle up on ur personals and punches...and come alot harder

TORCH

New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry
Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See
^I like the flow and multis and vocab iight diss 6/10^
6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star
You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars
^lmao he's owned nice flow nice diss 8/10^
I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First
Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse
^OWNED like crazy, nice closer and u finished him 9/10^
OVERALL:extreme verse for only 6 lines if u went any longer woulda gave dude a heart attack, but fa real homie ur verse was fresh ta deff. and thats why u deserve this win

v/torch

rtf my battles is in front lines, cant fit all in sig so rtf wit honest votes since i took the time to peep urs g/j
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Old 09-01-05, 08:59 AM   #20
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Old 09-01-05, 06:13 PM   #21
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Yo Both You PM The Link To Vote On Your Shit Holla Back Man Peace.
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Old 09-08-05, 08:05 PM   #22
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new
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Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there,
like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were
battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off,
make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off.
think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it,
like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid.
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suprissing...but lines sortta didnt hit as hard as the other verse...it was good though
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Torch
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New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry
Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See
6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star
You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars
I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First
Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse
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quik hard..and easy it was onpoint and ur punchlines gave me a good feeling..and u r vocab wasnt bad as well..nice work you got my vote
v/ Torch

can i get a RTF.....cheers its in my sig
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