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ok you have a good choice of beat i love these smooth type beats man its my style to i like how to toned your voice to it nice fit. i like your hook nice and catchy, good flow overall on the track, emotion aint to bad but it could be better, also i dont like how you layed that lil thing after you said a word you'd repeat it kinda, sometimes it sounded good but mostly it didnt, maybe dont do it all the time. but anyway this was pretty good man really lookin forward to a collaberation man

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no doubt....thanks...........

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yeah this is your best man, nice flow seriously, flows off sometimes, nice second voice, watch ur flow finaly lol, nice quality man, nice emotions, u really elevated man, pretty good, mmm u start rapping slow, i prefer fast man, u should of keep it fast feel me
overall dope track

yeah thanks alot..........

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this was a good concept...an aight drop...ya flow seemed off a majority of the time...u would have certain bars that flowed nice and then others would just crumble...lyrics were aight...i like the hook...only thing holding this back was ya flow fam...find that certain spot on the beat and just kill it...keep at it though fam...rtf on "Tell Me"

Feeling the beat for real but I feel your flow was better on other tracks because you started out good and then it seemed like you were rushing it a bit every now and then. Seek a bit more consistency on that point maybe. The lyrics were good, I'm loving the hook. It's catchy and a nice add-on to the song you know. Keep on at it boy, I definitely see a lot of elevation.

And I'ma get to that collab soon...I'm sorry, I was so busy with school and topicals. I'ma buy new mic though so I'll do it then you know. Hope you don't mind

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Its koo....thanks alot for the feed....iite debit im on that rtf now

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