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Old 10-15-05, 06:56 AM   #1
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sin'cere-your verse was pretty dope man, short but sweet...you had good flow...good structure...i feel your vocab was hott and intact...your topic was hard to keep track of...didnt really know what u were trying to do...but i feel you kept emotion tight..and everything in control. overall 8/10

chip-Your verse was hard to follow, first off ur verse was poorly structured...couldnt flow well at all..ur vocab wasnt much special but nothing to knock you on...i dont knwo if this was poetry or wut..but u had god emotion...and iight imagery..but nothing special.......u need to elevate a bit...but overall 6/10

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haaa..... it was poetry....... i assumed we weren't gonna have a battle about love........ oh well, uppin for more votes...........
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Old 10-01-05, 08:11 AM   #2
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srry for the poor structure.......... i actually did that on purpose.......... it was supposed to be like how when a man iz so deeply in love he can't think str8...........
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Old 10-01-05, 04:54 PM   #3
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Old 10-02-05, 11:01 AM   #4
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Old 10-02-05, 02:14 PM   #5
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Old 10-02-05, 07:45 PM   #6
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Old 10-03-05, 12:54 AM   #7
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Old 10-06-05, 04:11 PM   #8
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Old 10-07-05, 02:50 PM   #9
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Old 10-07-05, 06:49 PM   #10
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Old 10-08-05, 01:23 PM   #11
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Old 10-08-05, 06:07 PM   #12
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Old 10-08-05, 11:29 PM   #13
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Old 10-09-05, 10:54 AM   #14
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uppin for votes................
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Old 10-09-05, 12:38 PM   #15
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