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Puppy Fluffy, si?
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Your excitement must be huge.
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Within Eternity's Wither
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WOW! now if this wasn't something special............homie words really couldn't explain the complexity of this piece im more then impressed..........10/10
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I'll RTF. Thanks for the shit. I need to hit up NK too, but one of my friends had a fuckin' seizure today.
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Democratic elected congress.
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hit up that first link thaty nk put...
and vote honestly! if your sexy.
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And for feedback,
this was decent, had a nice flow with none single silable rhyming in the end but also had internal rhyming which switched the flow up and made it easier and sound better to read.. imagery was deep and this was a complex piece, goes to HOF... RTF on NK's first link please.
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Pretty gay when Mods favor individuals. HoF and he never dropped links? This wasnt even that good, the concept was ok, the flow was off 3/4 of the time, the only good thing he had was his vocab. If this was more of a Poeam, then WHY ISNT IT IN THE FUCKING POETRY SECTION.
This OM forum blows fucking ass. I'm fucking done with this forum.
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closed because you have no links, you were warned.
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