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Old 10-30-05, 12:46 PM   #1
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shit, once you get ya flow down you gonna be a serious problem...
DON'T SLEEP NIGGAS!!

lyrics were nyce, you got a sikk voice for this rap shit and ya swagger is ridiculously hawt girl...keep this shit up...work on dat flow and you ON it
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Old 10-30-05, 12:49 PM   #2
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Whoa, thank you! Appreciate your feed without a doubt
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Old 10-30-05, 06:02 PM   #3
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Okay vocals is a too low......ya flow is kinda choppy..but gettin smoother.....ya delivery sounds forced..u out-hyping yaself....the energy is starting to fall off after first couple bars......lyrics aint bad.......you def have improved greatly.......mixing was good despite being a tad low........overall def showed alot of improvement
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Old 10-30-05, 06:32 PM   #4
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Okay

Yeh thx
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Old 10-31-05, 05:38 AM   #5
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ok... beaty is nicee.. quality is koool. lyrics are decent, flow is ok.. gets choppy a bit but it's nothing that can't be sorted out. delivery and emotion could use some work... you have improved alot since u started... n u got an ill voice to do this.. stay up n keep droppin tracks... o yeh the outro is funny aswell lol
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Old 11-02-05, 06:48 AM   #6
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Thanks for feed hehe
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