^ pm strobe and tell him i got the win .

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Voted For: Cdusit

lol. OMG.
ok


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Check it, he crossin my territory so now I gotta rip this nigga into shreds
The tip of my pencil killin him lyrically, like I'm usin some gun lead
IIght this line was simple. weak punch bad opener

He ain't ready for me, his raps to pre-mature it's in the stages of wettin the bed
My shit notorious like B.I.G., he tryin to catch up like a bunch of feds
Too simple yet i still don't get it. make better punches.

He's just another white boy, an mc wannabe who tryin to be like the stars
But it's takin him 15 minutes just to think up one whole bar
Meh nice kinda. I chuckled. but thats what we all are.

Cus my punches crossin over like ghosts doin 187 like they inside of a car
heh this was a weak closer. better luck next time.

uhm ok street you basically suck. but theres always room for elevation. read more battles by 9th and daubs. I actually think they're dope. so read battles by vets. elevate. and then show this cat your real.


kids facing a lost cause like the never ending story..theres no end in sight
he a confused protester..I told him not to bite he yelled " I defend my right"
Comedy. My favorite weapon. nice bar decent opener.

Id say somthing funny, he replies with "but"......reinforcing his position**
asked him to battle......fag needed an hour to make a decision
a personal but not sure if its real. but it was decent.

I havent written generic wack punches for a fucking while
mainly because i dont want to bite Street Scripture's style
heh not the best but I couldn't stop laughing.

moments have past so i was going to use this line as a filler
but kids getting rapped in this battle...and im not refering to the star of thriller****
nice line. dude. MJ lines always make a killing.

I guess i shouldnt be so hard and end this on a freindly note
but Street Scripture reminds me of broke resturant customers....
........cant pay so he pretend he choked!!!!
ok this was kinda wack. heard this cconcept befoe but you didn't bite. but decent.

iight your verse was better than streets. but elevate a little when ya try to make ya lines funny. good verse good battle. you showed him. you took this easy. go hard on him next time.

Vote//Cdusit

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