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Old 11-22-05, 06:02 PM   #1
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i like the beat...kinda porn-ish...but good


UNF...ur voice is unique and I generally like it...but sometimes, it gets Kermit the froggish


no hate son...just be aware of that


flow is pretty good


smooth


LE...ur flow is good...but there's something about ur delivery that lacks presence...Im not sure exactly what it is...but, it's def. missin the cocky factor that might make u even doper...but ur overall rapping is def. good


this was a pretty solid track


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Old 11-22-05, 06:45 PM   #2
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this beat isnt really my feel but its pretty good....your voice is different i like it man, but the hook is pretty tight, the lyrics arent that bad either, i like the flow its pretty good but you dont reallly ride the beat i dont think...in my opinion but thats all good man, the second guy rides the beat decent and the flow is good, lyrics are there....this is a decent track all together...

leave me some feedback on my old track After the Storm....RTF
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Old 11-23-05, 12:15 PM   #3
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Ill Holla At he Link Soon.... Upp...
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Old 11-24-05, 03:18 PM   #4
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alright i remember ur first track that you sent me lmao god damn at the elevation :0
ok flow was on point pretty much thrrouughout lyrics were coolo only complaint is the emotion
limited has elevated alot lately too lyrics were cool flow was cool delivery wise i think you could upp it and the hisssssssssss lol oh well overall good traqck i like the beat thanx for leaving feed on my track
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Old 11-25-05, 02:11 PM   #5
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Thx Upppppppppppppppp
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