Voted For: chip

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
^^^weak opener
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
^^^ight
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
^^^Ight punch
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
^^^Weak
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
^^^No closer was WEak

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
^^^Ight oopener
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
^^^WEak
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
^^^^Good punch
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
^^^WEak
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
^^^Ight
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....
^^^Solid closer
THis was a weak battle both came wit some ight verse's nuthin to special.....cash werk oon ur punchss an personals.....chip u had some good lines an some weeak.....but u get this win cuz ur verse was more solid....V/Chip
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^^^^RTF HONESTLY......OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

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lmao @ rtf or vote will be removed! i'd love to check out everyone's shit, but as many of u know, i'm workin on my mixtape right now, and i'm not sure i can get around to everybody, that's also y i haven't been uppin, cuz i only get on once a day now.... and lmao @ the disrespect from cash complex or w/e...... wtf is ur alias...... pm it to me if ur tryin to keep it a secret........

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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Voted For: Cash Complex

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/

did not like this

this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/

ok punch could be a lil better

yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/

i liked this word play it was a good punch too

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sorry chip i wasnt really feelin any of ur stuff u had maybe one good punch though

lmao, iight logic, i respect everyone's opinion, just make sure u get to conner's house tonight, we gotta work on that song........

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..............

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Voted For: Cash Complex

Punches-CC
Complexity-CC
Flow-CC
Personals-Tie
Over-All CC

Cash had better punches had a more solid flow and a all together better verse...wasnt really feeling chips that much pretty basic rhyme scheme.


Vote-CC

Voted For: Cash Complex

hmmmmm not much to say chip's verse was kinda elementery accept for the last two bars... and his structure was kinda shitty... anyway

Opener: CC
Closer: Chip
Punches: CC
Personals: Chip
Structure: CC
Complexity: CC (much better rhyme scheme)
Creativity: tie
Vocab: CC

Vote: CC

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Voted For: chip

complex i wasnt feelin the first line and u rymes were harder to read cus of the rymes them self
chip u had good flow and structure and nice rymes
both were good no hate

vote chip

Voted For: chip

this was a close one but chip came a little better

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Voted For: chip

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
^ok
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
^good
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
^ok
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
^nah
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
^good
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy
^nice

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
^meh ok
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
^nah
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
^nope
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
^ok
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
^ok

V/Chip