NOW he realizes...

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Nah, I know I'm bad, but I'm elevating with every track.

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Lmao so the fix looks legit. Shit is so true though. I got hella IM's saying vote them for the awards. And it puts me in a position like umm ok, are you kidding or something?

LMAO, so true. BTW, if you want to know what are the REAL tracks of a given month, look at the amount of views, and divide that by the number of posts to get views per posts. That's how you know what was really getting people listening, because they'll talk to someone else about it, and that person will listen and talk to someone else about it and so on. The same old pack of idiots slithering into the awards section and voting for their exact same e-buddy every time means nothing.

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fo real tho, wich songs of mine didnt u like tha lyrics on?

i didnt do my BEST on those, they were just fo a lil mixtape i made 2 try n make sum cash just round here n shit, u know.

i try n always use multies, like atleast 3 sylables, werd

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I didn't say they were bad. they jsut all sound the same. The flow is the same, the deliv is the same, etc. Don't feel singled out, because SHITLOADS of MCs on here do the exact same thing. they might be fantastic on one song, but ASS in anything more than 2 songs since they all fade together and sound the same lyrically. Damn, I'm yawning just thinking bout it.

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haha. aight, next time i record sumthin ima try n switch up tha flow n shit. tha only thang im thinin iz like, if people lik eya flow on 1 song, then theyd have 2 like it on anutha... i think... but eventually itd just b tha same shit ova n ova again, hmmm, i see.

but if u got 8475 songs, its kinda hard 2 use a different flow n shit fo each 1 of them, u know, ud run out of new flows 2 think of. not that i got that many songs, prolly like 20, but u know wut im sayin? werd

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yo apexx can you tell me what you think of the instrumentals in the soundclick in my sig

that untitled song iz fr-fr-fr-fresh. i luv that shit. i wanna d/l it mp3, but noOoOoOoooOooooOooOOOOOO, just cuz tha color of my skin iz a lil different, PFFT, werd

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well get at me on msn: dark_manner@hotmail.com

i'll send you the tune from there

and yo thanks apexx but only one of the beats was a FL beat

Sounds liek you're using the default sound-sets which means that all the beats sound like gameboy beats. The assembly is good, but the default tones blow. Remember that Fruity Loops was originally designed to make videogame beats and tones for cellphones and shit liek that, so if you want to make music that's actually listenable, you gotta get other soundsets, sample, or drop FL completely.





You still sound exactly like Carson. Flow, delivery, lyrics, even your voice. You should stop rapping for about a month so you don't have this pre-conception of what your style is and jsut re-invent your self. Qual's good, but marketability wise, nah. No energy (which dosen't mean shouting), no cadence and a 1-syl rhymescheme. Old. House of Pain style. BTW, you need to do a lot more solo songs because it makes you look like you have a REAL low writing out-put or are just lazy.




For starters, it sounds like you've got a ferocious lisp. Your flow is texty, like your lyrics are there but your delivery is flat as shit like you're always depressed, even when you're amped. Your vocals have no mood at all, which makes you sound soul-less no matter what you're saying. Get drunk some time and record, you'll see wht emotion in lyrics should sound like. Your flow goes off at times. I don't gotta tell you that your quality is against the ropes and your mic is boo-T. Sounds like you got an accent on your R's and a's wich throws me off sometimes. Just dosen't sound liek you're agile while spittin yet, sounds liek you're tripping over your tongue. You need more time to solidify on your flow and learning to EQ wouldn't hurt you either so you can get some more body out of your mic. Get a pop filter, because your music is useless without it.




Your beats all sound hurt as hell to and it's because you're not using hip-hop instruments at all, you're using techno and D&B instruments and trying to use them in a hip-hop way. Those sounds are cool and all, but remember that the original music it came out of has about 12-20 different sounds all going on at once and the pace is high, so the music sounds a lot thicker. On your slower hip-hop beats with way less sounds, it sounds empty and boring. They also lack any flare and in most cases, a hook.

Your rhymes are okay. You're bout where I'd expect an average person to be, you just need more time to polish off because your flow is rushed sometimes. I'd say about 1/3rd the time from what I've seen. Just do more flow checking, because if you think you sound off beat, you do.

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Hopefully you'll change that, dog
and word @ everything else
:-( @ lisp.
Niggas on here have said that, but I dont hear it

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Im wack

But i got a mentality to improve until im average...then expand new stuff and get decent.

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Daubs MySpace

lmao @ this thread. Tell me what your jizz thinks of my songs yo.

www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless

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I just nutted to that track......

death jizz

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