I am dood .

LMFAO!!! "dood" ???
its DUDE... wtf?

thanx doods, lmao, werd

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Chill out dood I'm French

yeah, id say we both real close. u had sum good shit too, werd

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col...

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
ok...

im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
ok...

u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
ehh

u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
ok...

its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!
decent...

pretty consistent verse there.....

ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
cold/flu symptom/medicine/sick....all that...= played punch

ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
no...

my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
ok..

remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
pretty decent wordplay here...but fire/devil/hell punches...= played

jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!
decent closer...


V/ Col

why? cause his verse just had better punches and was WAY more consistent

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Vote - MaRVOLOUSJay

He won. I'll edit this post tomorrow with an explanation.

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!

vs.

my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.

and thats only cuz im bein nice....... Cols was ALOT more enjoyable, with pretty good wording, MArv mighta had some ok concepts but he crams shit WAY too much... cols shit was funny, LMFAO

v/kool kid

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!

vs.
ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.

ive never quoted a whole verse before but, it was pretty good. each line was definately quoteable...
Good battle, but Kool DEFINATELY came harder and more consistent with tha punches.

V/ kool kol b

Kool Col-B
no gang, u aint throwin up shit, like wen he's starvin n he vomits
u officially a bitch, a ex-man, so wack its funny, marv'll b a comic
l, o, l. Too many commas. Punch is blah.
im swingin fists at marvolous jay, im hittin tha nerd
i'll turn u black n blue jay, n then im flippin tha bird
Played.
u aint aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!, u america's wet dream
after i make u a vegetable im sho ya gonna get steamed
Set up is played. Punch is blah.
u think u run shit on this site? ha! hardly...
i'll cut u down 2 size n show u that this iz Ma RV
Haha nice wordplay.
its like a game of chess, cuz i'm tha king of this turney
u bout 2 lose, u gittin pawned, see, i'm takin out QUeENS EaRLy!
Punch is kinda played, but it was ok.

Overall, not a ton of creativity, funny punchlines but nothing amazing. Work on wittier stuff.

Marv:
ima merk dis nigga,yeah you alright but i spit sicker homie.
its over 4 dis kid ima make like 'dimetapp' & 'get rid of col(d) b'.
Nah. Wordplay is really forced in there.
ya line's is wack..........and as a man offline you are so butt.
kool say's he nwa's 6th member..well datz da reason they broke up.
Punch was good, set up line was filler though.
my flow's nuts....and dis how suck's he just a fuckin waste of bar.
kol-b in dis korv 3 tourney u like baseball bunts...you wont make it far.
Played.
remember when u was like "your amazin marv",im past da level he text.
fagget aint neva spit 'fire' he like dat 'movie' you just a 'devil reject'.
Nope. Punch is blah, no proof to him saying it, then possible fake personal.
jtr probly wrote ya shit,dis aint even serious i aint dat focus prick.
but still my flow's is sick..ya carrer is like pubic hairs its OVER-DICK!
Random JTR line, punch is played.

Overall, you really need to work on making personals. Most of your stuff are punches, with no real wordplay.

v- Kool Col B

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Kool Col-B wins.

This battle is now closed.

Moved to closed battles.