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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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01-16-06, 01:05 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: o.O
BOTH HAD A COUPLE DECENT PUNCHES ..OR ATTEMPTS AT LEAST BUT I BELIEVE THE o.O won but i question wuts up wit the name?...n e ways punches:equal personals:none really 2 me by either multis:neither structure:both flow  .O....apparition u like me wit stretched lines not 2 bad but shorten them a bit homie.vote: o.O both really didnt make go yo dat was nice or wow or w/e but i believe o.O...came a lil stronger...RTF on any of my battles open got like 3-4 peace |
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01-16-06, 01:06 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
whoa dat wasn't suppose 2 make a smiley...lol gotta rememba spaces between shit liek that
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01-16-06, 09:25 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: B397 C96F
Voted For: o.O
o.O - Your flow was ok, you had a good structure and you had some ok punchlines. Best Line - Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! Worst Line - Fuck this "donkey" face....he "can't think" for himself...he is a "dumb ass" I mean when his mom's "ready" this redneck is already ready to "cum fast" Apparition - You had a pretty sick rap. It had some good multi's in there. No real punches tho. Best Line - I Pop-Ammunition and Drop-Competition/ I gotta Cop-Recognition, cuz you can't Stop-Apparition// Worst Line - Get ready cuz you dont Know-the-Devil/ Its like you swimming in da Dead Sea cuz you Below-my-Level//** OVERALL - This was a pretty weak battle. I have to give my vote to o.O though for tryin' to come up with punches, and flowin' well. Appa you need to work on wordplay and punchlines when you rap, and try throwin' some personals in there as well. Vote - o.O RTF in SIG or VOTE will be REMOVED!
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01-21-06, 06:25 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: FC51 5AD2
vote up you all uppin cmon
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01-22-06, 08:15 PM
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IP: F557 5BE5
Voted For: Apparition
Vote - Apparition Seemed pretty one-sided to me. Apparition took flow and multis, because he was able to make both work together, and made his verse way stronger. He took Personals easily, with his first and fourth bars doin' some damage. Wordplay was a little weak from both, none had anything earth-shattering. Punches were about even from both catz. Vote: Apparition
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01-23-06, 09:40 PM
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IP: D87F 8F95
Voted For: Apparition
a yo betta structure and harder punches overall vote //Appartion |
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01-24-06, 08:37 AM
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what dat be...
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IP: 5021 8C8D
Voted For: Apparition
Leave you speechless as if i Threw-ya-Breath/ Im like your heart mutha fucka the way i beat You-to-Death/ ok closer app. u getting better keep on workin on it Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! ok closer u getting better too o.O and the winner is app. |
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01-24-06, 08:40 AM
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what dat be...
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01-25-06, 01:52 AM
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This was feedback posted for o.O
IP: BB6E EC88
Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin!
why have i heard that before oh cuz you recycled it from a cypher thats why rules say no recycling from what i remember
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01-27-06, 09:53 AM
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IP: 215F 8CED
Voted For: o.O
hmmm this was one of the closer battles I've voted on here... both of you actually came to play and flashed a lil skill doing it... which seems to be kinda rare around here... Opener: o.O Closer: o.O Punches: Apparition Personals: Apparition (the Avatar line hurt o.O's verse because we can't see avatar's while we're actually voting) Creativity: Apparition Creativity: Apparition Structure: o.O Enjoyment: o.O Vote: o.O
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01-28-06, 10:38 PM
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IP: 15DB AD62
Voted For: o.O
Apparition Wack verse? I Chew-Those, a body bag? Who-Knows!/ I run Through-Hoes, like a "0" in ya name i got You-Froze//* No punch, just self glorification. I Pop-Ammunition and Drop-Competition/ I gotta Cop-Recognition, cuz you can't Stop-Apparition// Self glorification. Get ready cuz you dont Know-the-Devil/ Its like you swimming in da Dead Sea cuz you Below-my-Level//** Meh, first line was a filler, punch was ok, not creative though. I need a Shot-at-Fame, dont be mad that i Bought-you-Shame/ Plan it out you need a Plot-to-Aim, its like im battlin myself cuz you aint Got-a-Name//*** Concept was very weak, punch was bad. Leave you speechless as if i Threw-ya-Breath/ Im like your heart mutha fucka the way i beat You-to-Death//**** Self glorification. Overall, you really only had one decent punch, rest was self glorification and mindless babble. Work on making every line count, and also using better concepts. o.O Say whatever you want kid, but Imma tell you now I ain't listening And battling you is like battling air, cuz nothing seems to be hittin me Played concept, wording was bad. This battle is plain black and white....even more so then Ricky and Lucy Makin "dough rise"? NAH...only this "baker's" AVATAR can afford Gucci Concept is played, punch is blah. Feeling like a diamond in the rough? Well they say diamonds are forever Drink 'dabeers' vomit and the clean floor is the only shine you'll have ever* Wording was really bad, concept was ok. Punch was bad. Fuck this "donkey" face....he "can't think" for himself...he is a "dumb ass" I mean when his mom's "ready" this redneck is already ready to "cum fast" Mom punches = no Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin! Punch was blah, concept was blah. Overall, you are quite basic I feel. You are decent, but you really need some help and elevation. Work on more original concepts and wordplay, and leave an explanation for certain punches like sig and avatars, cuz we can't see his av or sig. -------------------- My vote goes to o.O for a better verse and more punches. Both of you need to elevate and start using better personals and concepts. v- o.O
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