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03-29-06, 06:25 PM | #16 | ||||
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Your rhyming wasnt exact but still was a multi which gave this piece a unique flow. the short lines worked well with the flow also, was VERY poetical and had imagery and good vocab
The heart broken brush cried a scared spectrum's dyeing shards of love as I wiped his marred eyes against a stretch of page to create fine art. ^they were the best imo but overall a solid piece mate. Good work.
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03-30-06, 05:03 PM | #17 | |||
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Thanks alot for the feedback man
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03-30-06, 11:28 PM | #18 | |||||
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Nice show of emotion as usuall fams, has a poetic vibe though, like most your OM work of late does. Keep it up. I'll hit up that collabo this weekend.
Peace.
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03-31-06, 09:45 PM | #20 | |||
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Thanks for the feedback
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04-02-06, 06:05 PM | #21 | |||||
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*s.v. picks his jaw up from the floor.*
dopicus brutha........purely dopicus. i think that this is probably one of the dopest pieces i've seen you do.......and trust me, you've dropped some ridiculous fire in this open mic forum before. personally, i have no complaints with this piece. like i've said before: "...who can write rhymes precise and passionate just like atticus...". beautiful work fam, word. you truly are a crhmye sin/rapverse iconoclast. LETS SHOW 'EM HOW WE DO!!! BOOST THE MUTHAFUCKIN' CRHYME RATE!!! ...supervillain almighty, big bad crhyme sin...
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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04-12-06, 03:57 PM | #22 | |||
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Lol thanks for the love Sv
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