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Old 04-11-06, 08:48 AM   #16
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Yo this beat is pretty ill. I like the hook it's good. Your quality could be a little better. Delivery is good. Flow could be a little better in some places b/c it fell off and u ended up forcing too many syllables into a bar. Flow & quality are my only real problems wit the track. Keep grindin
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Old 04-11-06, 01:24 PM   #17
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thanks for the feed....i'm workin on perfectin the flow...quality won't get much better though...uppin
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Old 04-16-06, 07:20 PM   #18
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decent beat...

lol @ greedy

ohh..beat gets better...like the horns...ur come in is ok...ur flows choppy...no delevery...flows not bad...lol @ suck my dick...nice..i like how u did the 1st verse..not realy about loot...good message their..."life to b precise" line was wack...

nice track man "despite my race" was cool
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