iight i'll just say what i didnt like. if i dont comment on it then i liked it lol

ok implicit, flow's a bit choppy, it's on point pretty much except at certain places every once in a while u get a bit off. work on ya quality as well, ya vocals are separated from the beat. either back away from the mic or do some eqing. got a few empty spaces where some adlibs would go well
prahject, like jay said CALM DOWN ON THE FUCKIN ADLIBS!!!! lol and also as he said, that outro don't fit the topic at all mayne. s' not that your sayin nigga or anything just the "im goin hard now, you mothafuckas wanna test me" nah son? ain't workin lol didnt really fuck it up, just sorta threw me off a bit

anyway, just tryna help yal out. pz

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nice.......it was good


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