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Opponent 5 100.00%
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Old 05-08-03, 12:25 AM   #16
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Originally posted by Lyricali
'Twas close, and hopefully not the Best of Both Worlds.. However, Brutalizer built off of Dizzle's, which is a proverbial no-no..

"While you wait-for-liquor you can serve my lyrics specially catered"

Punches: Tie
Flow: Dizzle
Metas: Tie
Wordplay: Not Much.. Tie
Multis: Dizzle by a hair (more complex)

SUGGESTIONS: To both of you, don't use the bold and italicized letters to emphasize punches and other fine points, makes the given devices seem forced.

Brutalizer: Don't build, make a flow in a more simple format..
Dizzle: Sometimes, the rhyme scheme and flow you used are going to be too complex for this particular setting (if you catch my drift).. a sublinimal tip..



He Explained It All^^ Where Is This Guy When U Need Him?? LoL

Anyways, Vote-dizzle
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Old 05-08-03, 10:05 AM   #17
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vote to d-dizzle for reasons given previously
 
Old 05-08-03, 10:57 AM   #18
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my vote is gonna have to go to Lyricbrutalizer his shit was much more tighter
 
Old 05-08-03, 11:20 AM   #19
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The polls say 4-0 me so this is a wrap

You learn somthing new every day cuz I thought puttin the bold and underling wold put empasis on my words but most poeple just said it's a pain in da azz to read. And naw Lyricali it's not the best of both worlds....well I can only speak for myself and naw thats not my best. I try not to underestimate my opponiate 'cuz the one loss I do have thats what happended. But that was one of those spontanious-freestyle-lets go-mano e mano-right now-off the dome verses. no pre-written shit there.

aiight den I'm out Lyricbrtalizer make sure you put my name on the list of niggas you got crush by
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Old 05-08-03, 01:07 PM   #20
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Yo tell the truth shit wus close but Dizzle used creative punches thats what stood out from both verses

and brutalizer you had tight flow but not really creative feel me
eventhough Dizzle u have to work multi's fosho

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Old 05-08-03, 08:32 PM   #21
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you win nice battle
 
 


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