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Old 05-13-03, 01:13 PM   #16
ALan ALba
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yeah this was dope
Real complex, ill lyrics
you had some good words
sempt some was a forced rhyme
besides that it was cool
peace
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Old 05-13-03, 01:28 PM   #17
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Clever piece brah..

lovin the complexity and the wordplay..

no doubt..

hit me up for a collabo...

i gotta ill idea that will compliment ya style..

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Old 05-13-03, 02:44 PM   #18
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narc ouring for a month so he wont reply till then nahmean...just lettin ya know...

bismillah
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Old 05-13-03, 07:18 PM   #19
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Nice job dun...even confused me for a second...these my fav lines:

i praise and pray that my metallic arteries will somehow flush my system out/
pumps blood thats brown, stained and drowned in pain/
in shrouds i reign, mourning the loss my own soul processed and resurrected/
infected by retrospective, collective thoughts set forth defective

looks like repentence...nice job
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