yeah this was dope
Real complex, ill lyrics
you had some good words
sempt some was a forced rhyme
besides that it was cool
peace

Clever piece brah..

lovin the complexity and the wordplay..

no doubt..

hit me up for a collabo...

i gotta ill idea that will compliment ya style..

peace
one..

narc ouring for a month so he wont reply till then nahmean...just lettin ya know...

bismillah

Nice job dun...even confused me for a second...these my fav lines:

i praise and pray that my metallic arteries will somehow flush my system out/
pumps blood thats brown, stained and drowned in pain/
in shrouds i reign, mourning the loss my own soul processed and resurrected/
infected by retrospective, collective thoughts set forth defective

looks like repentence...nice job