uppin once again.

Peace

first of all respect...i was feelin this piece all around namean...i think the verses were hot shit like curry excrement, and the hook was mad ill like alfred e neuman in a hospital bed...good topic, wordplay was consistant throughout the piece...keep elevatin locsta...wahid

Thanx dawg,uppin.

damn...
lol, basically sat there after reading it and said damn.
your obviously on a high level,some nice shit

at first glance i was gunna say shorten it
but after reading it through like twice...
you got it down right...it aint oo long

nice hook too- fereal

quote:

"no original flow or extra terrestrial ideas emcees only wanna talk about what they acheived and own/
how many songs bout bling and bitches,must be written before they find out theyr'e not alone/"

so tru b, so tru

thanx dawg,uppin,

Peace

seems like alot of replies but it's actually only been ike 4,i been uppin alot.

Peace

ZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........Again peeps.

Peace

uppin again all u sleepy people,jus another few replies will do.

Peace

Damn dawgs.

man, I couldn't sleep on this one. I feel this. I am self made and motivated. expression is freedom. This is nice.

graspin sign language i use one finger pointing north to say fuck you i'm never gonna stop/
it's gonna be a hard climb but i won't lose grip until i reach it to tha top/

Nice drop west.....very nice.....straight fire...

Your vocab seemed a little lower than ususal, but its ok, you did good in this part. Vocab Overall- 7/10
FLow was excellent, Nice job, none of your lines seemed to be stretched. Flow Overall- 9/10
Creativity, Loved the Topic, NIce Choice, Nice Added in hook there, really brought this peice up.

Overall- 9/10....I think you did a really nice job on this peice....
Get at me about a collab, ya know?
Nice drop...

Keep it real

thanks,uppin.

Peace

Tight, tight, tight. This was amazing. Good use of vocab. The opening line was really good. return the favor on my piece Outlaw

Thanx dawg,Uppin.

Uppin,once more.

Peace