the subject matter seemed to cliche for me..(i.e. im from the hood) so i never really could get into it..it flowed beautifully, could use a few multis, but overall a decent read.

Hey man thanks for the feedback its much appreciated, keep it coming, thanks.

Good peice masta c...you had good multies could have been better but you know...your flow was great...easy read i think.....i was feeling the vibe of this peice though....your rhyme scheme was good.....and you had good structure.....keep dropping Masta C...

i really like readin ur stuff this was one of the better ones that ive read keep it up

Hey thanks guys for the feedback, keep it coming, much appreciated. thanks.