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View Poll Results: IS THIS A WORTHY READ
THIS SHIT SUCKS WOARSE THEN KING OF THIEVES 0 0%
IT WASNT THE BEST BUT HAD POTENTIAL 1 50.00%
WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU THINKING(YUCK) 0 0%
THIS WAS A HOT DROP THAT MAKES YOU THINK 1 50.00%
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Old 10-12-03, 04:55 AM   #16
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thnks
multi's i cant expliain what i don t know.
longigal is a word meaning of length
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Old 10-12-03, 05:07 AM   #17
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O'kay O'kay

Your vocab did seem strong throught this piece and the rhymes were kept quite complicated.. Well Done.. I didn't see no multis in it tho.. Thats a shame, Next time try and incorporate some.. Your flow was okay but did fall in some places.. But wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be which i anticipated from the structure..The content was good and what you wanted to say on the topic was said and I related to some of that.. The topic was nicely chosen aswell.. All the best if this is going to be put onto audio

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Old 10-13-03, 02:07 PM   #18
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YOUR MESSAGE WAS PRETTY TIGHT. WORK ON THE DELIVERY
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Old 10-13-03, 02:13 PM   #19
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THE MESSAGE WAS PRETTY TIGHT, I DON'T HOW IT WOULD SOUND TO A BEAT BUT YOUR SYLLABLE COUNT WAS A LITTLE OFF ON SOME LINES-GOOD POTENTIAL THOUGH
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Old 10-13-03, 03:10 PM   #20
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