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THIS SHIT SUCKS WOARSE THEN KING OF THIEVES | 0 | 0% | |
IT WASNT THE BEST BUT HAD POTENTIAL | 1 | 50.00% | |
WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU THINKING(YUCK) | 0 | 0% | |
THIS WAS A HOT DROP THAT MAKES YOU THINK | 1 | 50.00% | |
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10-12-03, 04:55 AM | #16 | ||||||
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multi's i cant expliain what i don t know. longigal is a word meaning of length |
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10-12-03, 05:07 AM | #17 | ||||||
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Your vocab did seem strong throught this piece and the rhymes were kept quite complicated.. Well Done.. I didn't see no multis in it tho.. Thats a shame, Next time try and incorporate some.. Your flow was okay but did fall in some places.. But wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be which i anticipated from the structure..The content was good and what you wanted to say on the topic was said and I related to some of that.. The topic was nicely chosen aswell.. All the best if this is going to be put onto audio Pz.. Holla at mine ...::Mind Over Matter::... |
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10-13-03, 02:07 PM | #18 | |||||||
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YOUR MESSAGE WAS PRETTY TIGHT. WORK ON THE DELIVERY
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10-13-03, 02:13 PM | #19 | |||||||
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THE MESSAGE WAS PRETTY TIGHT, I DON'T HOW IT WOULD SOUND TO A BEAT BUT YOUR SYLLABLE COUNT WAS A LITTLE OFF ON SOME LINES-GOOD POTENTIAL THOUGH
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