yo without gettin too much into detail ill tell u this i thought it was ill i dont think these can be critiqued since its out of ure heart ya know? people cant tell u wat u shuda and shudnt have put anyway i liked it

peace

Thank You Herbal! Thas True

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i gave u feedback earlier.
yo can u hit this up w/ an honest vote please it is gettin slept on thanx.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86737

nice.... next time you write try to throw sum mets in their to make the reader think instead of jus reading da basics

overall nice shit....

Peril eyes 305

Yeah Thanx

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Aye, personal and raw. And that's what dictated the direction of this piece.

A quite searing vent. Really gritty and down to basics.

..resp..

Aight,Koo!

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