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11-24-03, 01:16 PM
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/\/\ send me a link with a battle against someone decent and we will see what up ait?
anyway uppin for more feed |
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11-24-03, 02:14 PM
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I Thought the structure had no errors... Vocab was good... flowed well... definetly a good read... nice topic as well... keep them coming.
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11-24-03, 10:50 PM
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IGHT....ILL BREAK IT 4 YA
FLOW....8/10 LIKED UR FLOW...COULD HAVE UP'D IN A FEW SPOTS BUT OVERALL GOOD... structure..was jus fine.. WORDPLAY...made this piece a lot better i think...can improve..but its good... topic....4 ur first open mic was original...so propz there.. VOCAB...was good ...glad u didnt push it 2 the "WAT THE FUCK HE TRYIN 2 SAY" point...i hate that throws a piece... OVERALL..like ya said u have improvements..here and there....mabe up ur intensity......but all 2gether..a well put piece...well writtin.... GOOD LOOKIN PIECE... SPECIALLY 4 THE 1ST... PROPZ U KEEP WRITIN ILL KEEP READIN AND FEEDIN 4 YA KID... PEACE
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11-24-03, 10:53 PM
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nice kid i was feelin this ncie flow it was real deep to deff feelin this piece nice drop man
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11-24-03, 11:14 PM
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appreciated please more feedback with depth
thanks peace |
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11-25-03, 12:25 AM
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yo this was a phat drop dude everythin was off the hook like completely but ya dude i dont know wat else to say except this shit was dope
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94198 hit this up if u could Last edited by KeMy$t : 11-25-03 at 01:33 AM. |
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11-25-03, 08:31 PM
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11-26-03, 02:58 AM
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uppin fuck man!
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11-26-03, 05:55 AM
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good bruv.....good shit....Is that herbal????????????
8/10 bruv
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11-26-03, 01:29 PM
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thanks for the feedback....you could have critiqued i though
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12-06-03, 05:23 PM
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good vocab and flow
lots of imagery on this piece which i thought it was real dope good job emerge |
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12-06-03, 06:21 PM
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I thought this was pretty good hommie. I like the usage of the vocab, you played that real nice. It was an alright flow. The rhyme scheme was straight. I would have liked it to be longer, ya know. Nice drop hommie, be sure to peep my rap im about to put up, aight...
8 / 10 ...For A small write... OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion
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