i thought this was a decent enought read, unlike handcuffs, i thought you kept the topic well, it just werent so narrow, quite broad..i liked it. nice structure, got the flow good....maybe over played the multis, but nice drop.......Pz....

Yeah man this was pretty good.....You structured this pretty good i thought, some of the lines were kinda long but the flow made up for it i thought....You had pretty good vocab as well...overall id say this was a pretty good piece, it was a nice read.

thanx for all the input lets get some more

yo man that was Nyce.....Your Flow was nyce.....a good drop i liked it..............allround 9.8/10

Nice drop dunny... had me readin all the way thru,
ya flow was good i kept up wit it, (any real emcee can do that)
you stayed on focus of your topic for the most part
you put yo rhymes an own creativaty in ya postage

Good Verse's all the way thru...i give it at 6-7... there was no really good use of vocab, repeated alot of the same words (which alot of emcee's do... including my self) i mean hey nobody's perfect... good ish dunny....

on3

thanx for all the feedback i appreciate it

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nice drop dunny...reppin' the fam nicely...keep doin' ya thing...ya flow and vocab was on point...and you stayed on subject well...

you need to reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread or it gets deleted.
thanks.

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i have the ones i wrote on at the top

read it, but by the time I got down to the end of the screen to post my reply I forgot what it was about, blame the weed!

uppin