Nyce battle, too mad fgee punked out and ill mental dropped a quickie, many solid bars in both, tha breakdown....

Thrust: Rhyme Scheme: 8, Flow: 7.5, Story: 8.5, total: 24

Ill- Mental: Rhyme Scheme: 8, Flow: 8, Story: 7, total: 23

close battle, you both had solid verses, length in my eyes killed ill mentals, thrust you dropped a hott one, even dropped a hook, lol,
vote - thrust, no hard feelins, may tha best man win, hit up my battle, stay real, peace, 1

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

yea, I feel Thrust took this by more than a little bit.
His piece was consistent where as Mental's was...
ehhh sometimes. Both drops were nice though.

vote - trhust

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the wordplay on trust was sick
nice vocab,,not a cry for me stry but not to thug.

mental had a sick story - wordplay and mults
but i felt his story more......
i related to it so he got t

vote mental

both had a sick battle

Yeah im thinking thrust had the upper hand because he prepared for his more...Mental i've seen great pieces from you mayne...this one was good but not enough to edge the win...

vote=thrust

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I didnt know you are aloud to vote on your own crew hommie. Why is that legel here, but not in the Front lines, and such?
( and yes I know both of them are in your crew, But not with rules battle. I just wanna know why this is aloud. )

-Mental God, you where straight hommie. I wasnt feeling it to much, not that its bad or anything. I think your flow dropped off at some points of time. Maybe work on Vocab as well...

-Thrust, I thought this was pretty good. I liked the vocab, and the flow of the lines. My only suggestion is to work on a better rhyme scheme. Other than that, good imagery and allusions. Nice drop hommie, worked with the topic good.

Vote - Thrust

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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ok, thrust you win... like i told you on aim homie, your verse was better. Good Job!

now vote on our battle, lol, stay real, peace, 1

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i'm plannin on it maddawg...
thanks mental...nice quick piece
o n...the reason why crew votes are allowed...
cuz in SS we stay true...
we're not gon' dickride here

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exactly...anything that is out side of this league is thrown out as far as hate and what not...only legit votes and i trust each member on that....

Mental are you still in soft focus noticed you changed your sig..

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Thrust wins
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