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12-10-03, 02:44 AM
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12-10-03, 06:41 AM
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nice shit dawg
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12-10-03, 03:33 PM
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/\should be banned...reply with better feed you piece of fucking shit
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12-10-03, 03:53 PM
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this was a well structered piece had nice wordplay and some creative thoughts, the flow was alright i liked the topic...good read
you forgot to poll vote on my battle...can you hit it up weith it thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=3
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12-10-03, 04:22 PM
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thanks...done
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12-10-03, 09:17 PM
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12-10-03, 10:28 PM
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12-11-03, 05:48 PM
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upp muther fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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12-11-03, 08:03 PM
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well I can't really say much for the topic it din't really grasp my interest as much as I thought it would but anyways. your flow was a lil bit choppy to me it seemed it was fell of juss a lil bit but nuttin big. you had good vocab and a really good structure and nice multi's and u had a good rhyme scheme and some decent wordplay. overall nice piece bro. keep up. peace.
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12-12-03, 10:04 PM
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u had nice multis and it flowed nicely
ur vocab was good and your structure ok wordplay keep droppin! 8.5/10
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12-13-03, 08:35 PM
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intresting and unusual thats what i like about it. keep it up
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12-15-03, 02:47 AM
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your the worst fucka emcee ever...worst piece..
lol just playin This was very good...Vocab was strong and the imagery was pretty good...best line One last breath I take...as I inflate my chest...heaving I blindly and wildly attack so fiercely...I aint believing Good job dawg.. 8/10.
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12-15-03, 04:18 AM
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Yeah this was a pretty good drop here i thought....your structure was good in this, like it always is....your vocab was good as well....Flow in this was alright, stayed on point through out it, kinda lost me at a few points though but nothing real big...You had some good multies....overall good drop....keep at it.
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12-17-03, 03:17 PM
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Flow wuz nice, Part of the verse didnt really fit the ending , decent wordplay, Keep spittin tho the flow wuz nice most of the way. thanks for the look.
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01-12-04, 07:43 AM
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