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12-11-03, 05:42 PM
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
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12-11-03, 05:45 PM
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IP: A845 7EA3
Sup son,yo good concept,nice rhyme scheme,flow,vocabe,imagery,some nice met's and wordplay was also there.
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12-11-03, 09:46 PM
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
West!!!!! welcome back dawg!!!
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12-11-03, 10:15 PM
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wow my mouth hurts from speakin time to myself
over and over again but concept was good felt the words u put out meta's didnt jump out at me but they were there and complimented ur piece.
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12-12-03, 05:22 AM
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IP: 4CFB 9C60
that was a nice read I though it was good....ya structure was excellent...ya Flow was Good...ya Vocab was great Not much For me to say.....a bit short but it worked......all and all a good read
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12-13-03, 11:47 AM
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
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12-13-03, 11:56 AM
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Good immagery , rhymes were dope an on point, ..flow was there..concept was worked out nicely,.. Vocab was on point for this drop, and i enjoyed readin this, ..keep dropin maniZZLe.. = )
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12-13-03, 12:55 PM
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IP: CEF5 716F
Dope piece
I loved it I felt the whole concept Keep dropping |
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12-13-03, 02:41 PM
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A King Missing a Queen...
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IP: 8D7B 43DF
This was a really nice drop hommie, you always droppin good flows. I liked the vocab, structure was good, and the topic was good as well. This was an all around nice verse. Showed alot of skill through this piece right here hommie...
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