im kind of cool with both dudes so this vote is honest

V / deadly vision i think his mulites came harder and that his disses were better than li's i felt like li had some enormously strethced lines that kind of fucked his verse up.. deadly vision came harder with the shit also.. li had some good personals but i dont think they matched up to deadlies punchlines

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aswell as i am down with both L.I. and Deadly

I felt that deadlys verse was a little better then L.I.'s ........his flow was better along with his structre and his punches was hittin harder along with sticking.......i enjoyed both verse butthe fact remains that his verse was better so im going to vote for deadly vor a better verse

v/Deadly

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Up.

for people that kno how to judge a battle. Instead of riding dyck.

2-2

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Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads…
this was kinda played with the heavy loads but still nice creativty 7/10
Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type…
On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe…
sorry I thought this was weak dint name I title? 4/10
Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued…
Quote:
Originally Posted by DeadlyVisionL.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol
I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league…
LOL good line much better 8/10
Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing…
Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…
erm a bit played a bit good I think it was a 7/10
Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover…
If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over…
erm that was another ok/played line . . but weaker 6/10

32/50



kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits..
Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it..
that was a pretty cool line 7/10
I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn..
fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns..
erm a bit played I`ve heard the tax returns many times 5/10
Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?...
Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless....
Nope to much fillers here 3/10
Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative...
And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit....
lol good line 8/10

=M-e-r-k-e-d=

Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight"..
You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate..
erm this was pretty not good I don’t like the style or smuin and “ doing that isi enoying 6/10



29/50

Good battle you both my boys but L.I had less fillers and he came harder
don’t non of you be mad @ me I hate voting when two people im cool with battle lol I feel bad

V/L.I

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Ight, since I know both of you and we coo and all, I'm going to break it down good for yeah...


Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads…
Really good intro, flow was on point

Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type…
On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe…
was an ok line, didn't hit very hard though
Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued…
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Originally Posted by DeadlyVision
L.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol

I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league…
Really tight line, but was off topic, remember this is a battle

Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing…
Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…
Hot shit, really tight, fa sho

Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover…
If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over…
Really tight hardhitting punch, but should have been used earlier


kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits..
Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it..
Pretty good opener, punch wasn't that hardhitting though

I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn..
fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns..
Hahaha, that was a funny ass line, tight punch

Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?...
Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless....
Ok line, but punch was not hardhitting
Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative...
And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit....
Tight transition line, really kept it flowing with word play

=M-e-r-k-e-d=

Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight"..
Once again, another wordplay line, similar to my style

You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate..
Ok closer, I got what you was sayin, but didn't hit hard for me


In closing, I believe DV won this one because he was very consistent with his flow. MCs have come to think that you can win a battle on punchlines alone, which is not true. True elevated mcs rely on different parts of his technique instead of just one.

v-DV

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3-3 tied up...UPPING..........

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Aint That A Bitch?

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Im still not sure on what basis L.I managed to get votes on this one.

Flow- Deadlyvision by far
Punches- Deadlvision by a fair way
Personals- Practically even
Complexity - Deadlyvision

I didn't like the simplicity of L.I's flow, the sylable coutnwas fucked and there wans't no shemeing of rhymes. But theres no hate here, just there truth.

Peace to both writers. v/deadlyvision

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^theres no way his vote can count...first off it aint explained well....second off im in a crew battle with him....thrid off he is in DV's crew....i think u would agree DV...still 3-3...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Aight I feel what you sayin.

3-3

Up you fuckers...lol

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breakdown for l.i:

flow:nice flow i don't have problems with it 7/10

volcab:alright marginaly better then average 6/10

punches:alot of lines mainly of average quality fav line,"Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…" alright job 7/10

overall:20/30

breakdown for deadly vision:

flow: some of the rhyming and multis were alittle shady but overall alright 7/10

volcab:good job nothing too advance though 6/10

punches:some alright personals nothing too strong though fav line,"Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight".." the big thing was the amount of them not being up around that of l.i 6/10

overall:19/30

vote--real close battle one of the better ones this week good job from both of you my vote is for l.i though

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Almost pissed his pants seein that I didn’t post….....thought I no showed…
Hopes were crushed when the truth was broke…doesn’t like heavy loads…
HMMMMM..DONT SEE NOTHIN IN HERE
Stick to ya audio’s……………….cause text woesnt meant for your type…
On ya way you go…………...name in the title, hype goes down the pipe…
AIGHT I GUESS
Already handed a loss……………not one of your verses got us intrigued…
Quote:
Originally Posted by DeadlyVision
L.I. Stop fuckin wit those nooobs....lol
HOW IS THIS A DISS/ HE IS TALKIN TO U

I just keep getting stuck wit em…for example this weeks battle in the league…
THIS IS GAY,NO PUNCH
Shit is tense till your verse is dropped…….then straight to amusing…
Just nick name this kid RB’s fisherman…the way he hooked on losing…
FINALLY A PUNCH...NOT BAD
Get ya weak ass outta here, bein run over like a game of red rover…
If you want us to fall for them lines, give us sometin to trip over…
WOW,ANOTHER PUNCH......2 PUNCHES IN ONE L.I. VERSE,THATS A FIRST



Attenchuuun someone about to get M-e-r-k-e-d.

Quote:
Originally Posted by L.I.
I Am on the net to pick up chicks...


^kido u dont like womens!! see you aint gonna get no bare hits, I can spare wits..
U SHOULD'VE MADE A PUNCH WITH BARE HITS....SPARE WITS IS JUST A MULTI,NOTHING HITS IN THERE
Your ass like popular opinions even R and Profilikz faggots that share it..
OK I GUESS
I swear this little kid i smack the internet nerds who's flows lack the burn..
fruitcake u know u gonna take a loss, cause I give payback like tax returns..
TAX LINES ARE PLAYED
Metaphorically Insane? stop copyin writs, and paste it, u think u a thief and shit?...
Like fiendish chicks-wit teeny tits-I leave yo wack herbish MT crew meaningless....
I DIDNT LIKE THIS.....U WERE CONCENTRATING TOO MUCH ON MULTIES....U USUALLY HAVE PUNCHES.....
Its a unavoidable predictcament, when u think u can win, when u lyrically sensative...
And 14yrs old kid is impoyd a already " finish him", when ultrasonic rhythem hit....
DIDNT LIKE IT.
=M-e-r-k-e-d=

Listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "bitch still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight"..

I DIDNT LIKE THIS AT ALL...
You was born wack wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and I guess no 'way' ta 'elevate..
NOT FEELIN THIS

HMMMMMM..VISION,I JUST WASNT FEELING UR VERSE,...I DUNNO WHY ITS NOT UR USUAL STYLE.....L.I. KIND OF SURPRISED ME....HE ACTUALLY HAD 2 DECENT PUNCHES.....VISION,THERE REALLY WASNT ANYTHING THAT STOOD OUT TO ME.......IMMA HAVE TO GO WITH L.I.

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ayo deadly had some pretty nice ish up in there I was able to feel his on a more gangsta level and a hardhittin level, he had nice struc, wordplay, and the punches was aight.

LI was nice also his was easy to understand, struc was aight, word play was aight, and the overall battle was good, but because DV came harder, my vote goes to him.

V/DV.

I've voted now return the fav. please, thanks alot.