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Old 07-23-04, 01:30 AM   #16
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Not a bad battle, though I'm not big fan of that "style switch" junk, in the middle of a verse.. God, you had some nice wordplay but your scheme and flow got a bit choppy in a few places.. You had some strong punches, but a couple of them were a bit played.. Prem, you had a pretty strong verse overall.. You had nice punches, though again, I think a couple could have hit harder.. you had nice flow/structure.. and you had some nice hard hittin' personals.. Like I said at the beginning, this wasn't a bad battle, but I'm gonna toss my vote to Prem for havin' a stronger verse.. much respect to the both of ya..

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Old 07-23-04, 03:20 AM   #17
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battle closed...prem wins
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